Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Very interesting effect.Good pic.No OCG errors.Would work well in a Burn/Exodia Deck.I would give it a 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 [align=center]Don't always need to make long effects' date=' just saying.[/quote']I like long effects XD Very interesting effect.Good pic.No OCG errors.Would work well in a Burn/Exodia Deck.Thanks. for some reason all my cards are burn/work well with burn XD.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 [align=center]what rank should i be probably low XD? (i have not even been assigned a rank XD) Also can anyone rate this card' date=' im using it for a contest i want to see how i did:[img']http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv140/gefhx/00000.png[/img]Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all face-up Zombie-Type and LIGHT monsters you control. Neither player can declare a attack during the first 5 turns from the turn when this card is Special Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all Zombie-Type monsters lose 500 ATK and all LIGHT monsters lose 500 DEF except this card. During the End Phase of each turn, this card loses 400 ATK and DEF. When this card's ATK and DEF reaches 0 by its own effect, this card gains 3200 ATK and 1200 DEF. When this card's ATK and DEF reaches 0 again, destroy this card.[/align]Lexadin, it's hard to understand. With some modifications, this is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 [align=center]@ Ghost RyderLooks like i made some wording/grammar errors Thanks for the fix.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Oh, to be honoust, I don't really read the OCG of long effects. I just skim it, but sometimes I see something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 You also don't need own in the effect. See, Legendary Card Makers only make very small mistakes on OCG and grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 [align=center]@ Ghost RyderI make more mistakes on Grammar than OCG though as i saw i only made a few grammar and 0 OCG mistakes which means that card is pretty good XD. But i think you may be wrong on the own part, i have sen own on many real cards in that same situation.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 That's true, but even they can fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 [align=center]@ Ghost RyderI make more mistakes on Grammar than OCG though as i saw i only made a few grammar and 0 OCG mistakes which means that card is pretty good XD. But i think you may be wrong on the own part' date=' i have sen own on many real cards in that same situation.[/b'][/align]Own effect. Nobody can ever know how to get perfect OCG because the TCG makes random placed OCG IMO. owner's hand would be correct. I gradually learned OCG with my own mind. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Shureee... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 [align=center]@ Ghost RyderI make more mistakes on Grammar than OCG though as i saw i only made a few grammar and 0 OCG mistakes which means that card is pretty good XD. But i think you may be wrong on the own part' date=' i have sen own on many real cards in that same situation.[/b'][/align]Own effect. Nobody can ever know how to get perfect OCG because the TCG makes random placed OCG IMO. owner's hand would be correct. I gradually learned OCG with my own mind. lol.ok lol. Well anyways thanks for the fix on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Maybe I'll make a new card. I shall think about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 I don't like long effects anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Haha, I like them (some of them) Ghost Ryder, you fixed the lore really nice, can't spot a single error now :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 See what I mean? I don't know whether I mastered it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Well, imo you did, very well alsoBtw, I have made some of those Alphabetic cards I said I was gonna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Post it right? I saw your discussion with Lexah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 I will post maybe 2 or 3 or just 1 tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Make shure you'll give the link here, so I can rate them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 sorry, my computer is so laggy right now, I can't upload them today, will do it tomorrow but I can try to get them up today, but can't promise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 No problem, I can wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-185586-post-3745448.html#pid3745448 here^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Lol, already rated it.Anyways, Tom, did I already ask you what your fav Vanilla is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 don't know, I like Cyber-Tech Alligator, strong like hell for a Level 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Mhhh? Interesting. Mine is also my fav card. The almight Headless Knigh. It isn't even strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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