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So..I made a little mini thing..Tell me what ya'll think?

 

[align=center][spoiler=Dark Dimension Drago]

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[spoiler=Summoning Spirit, Drakar]

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[spoiler=Raging Dragon Spirit, Pyron]25511.jpg

 

 

 

[spoiler=Black Dragon of Chaos]

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[spoiler=Effect]1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Decrease the ATK of this card by 200 for every card that is removed from play. You can remove 1 monster you control from play to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you use this effect. When this card is destroyed, you can remove 2 cards you control from play to reutrn this card to the Extra Deck. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 of your removed from play Level 2 or lower monsters.

 

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I hope I'm making a good comeback ^_\\\

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@Striker - Good card, balanced for a Level 4 Vanilla, pic is realistic but fits the name, Type and Attribute

 

@Yankee - 1st cards should be "... return 1 of your removed from play cards to your Graveyard."

It is balanced since it has low stats.

 

2nd card's last effect should be "add", not "put".

Also balanced.

 

3rd card should be "..., Special Summon 1 of your ..."

Good Tuner with good effect.

 

4th card should be "This card loses 200 ATK for each card that is removed from play.

This card works really well with the other monsters which seems to be made only to help this card activate its effect.

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@Striker - Good card' date=' balanced for a Level 4 Vanilla, pic is realistic but fits the name, Type and Attribute

 

@Yankee - 1st cards should be "... return 1 of your removed from play cards to your Graveyard."

It is balanced since it has low stats.

[b']I don't see that as right..Not all cards are rfp from the grave, so saying return doesn't quite make sense..[/b]

 

2nd card's last effect should be "add", not "put".

Also balanced.

Done

 

3rd card should be "..., Special Summon 1 of your ..."

Good Tuner with good effect.

 

Just noticed the missing r, lol

 

4th card should be "This card loses 200 ATK for each card that is removed from play.

This card works really well with the other monsters which seems to be made only to help this card activate its effect.

I don't like using "loses" and stuff like that. I use new/old OCG, it's a mix, and, increase and/or Decrease is still correct

 

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Presenting Emperor Dragon...

[spoiler=Emperor Dragon]285869a.jpg

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when "The Emperor" is in play. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Emperor" monster from your Graveyard. The monster Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed at the End Phase of your next turn.

 

 

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I don't really know, bu you should add (bold):

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when "The Emperor" is in play. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Emperor" monster from your Graveyard (except this card and "The Emperor". The monster Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed at the End Phase of your next turn.

 

If "The Emperor" isn't that srong you could just skip it, and you can skip this card too, now when I think of it...

Good card, strong support for your "Emperor" monsters!

See no OCG errors, great card Striker! But you should add from where it is Special Summoned.

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Speaking of The Emperor here he is...

[spoiler=The Emperor]285869wox.jpg

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 "Emperor" monsters. When this card attacks successfully your opponent draws 1 card and you gain 500 Life Points. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon "Emperor Dragon" from your Deck or Graveyard ignoring the Summoning Conditions.

 

 

 

I just finished this now.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 "Emperor" monsters. When this card attacks successfully, your opponent draws 1 card and you gain 500 Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Emperor Dragon" from your Deck or Graveyard, ignoring the Summoning Conditions.

 

That is a strong monster you got there!

Agree with LEx, can be OPed, but so are the Egyptian Gods as well.

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