MoxTheFox51590 Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stealthumbreon Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 It's nice. However, I have to deduct points for using DIVINE and Divine-Beast, as those are illegal in the eyes of most members. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 The first sentence is kind of off. Instead of saying "You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot set this card).", say:"This card cannot be Set. This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters you control."Everything else is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 pretty good, cortez is right, then ur golden Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 The first sentence is kind of off. Instead of saying "You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot set this card)."' date=' say:"This card cannot be Set. This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters you control."Everything else is fine.[/quote']agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 awesome for a newbie. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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