Camalie Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 this took me several hours to do I would like to know what people think about my cards. I'm not done making them I still need a lot more people I know added the extra Guren S.E.I.T.E.N. I just felt like putting it there Geass:Jeremiah-Cyborg:Rakshata:Kallen:Guren MKII:Guren Flight Enabled:Guren S.E.I.T.E.N.:Guren: S.E.I.T.E.N. (update):Lancelot Albion:Sword of Akasha:C.C.:Zero:The Witch and the Warlock:Zero Requiem:Zero-The Savior: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roperl Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 this took me several hours to do I would like to know what people think about my cards. I'm not done making them I still need a lot more people Geass:Jeremiah-Cyborg:Rakshata:Kallen:Guren S.E.I.T.E.N.:Lancelot Albion:Sword of Akasha:C.C.:Zero:The Witch and the Warlock:Zero Requiem:Zero-The Savior: card grammger could do with fixing up for example, when you start a cards effect always start with a capital letter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 At First i thought they were Gemini monsters. But seeing as they are not, You might want to change the first card or the monsters. I rate this a 7/10. Some OCG errors and other things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camalie Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 I'll make the corrections soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naruto110 Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 sweet cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camalie Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 I'm pretty sure I still have some mistakes on the cards if I do please point them out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tooy66 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 nice cards i lovvem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camalie Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 I've added the corrections now I'll add some more cards to this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camalie Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 New Cards:Burai:Buraikai:Buraikai(Tohdoh):Kallen's Burai:Zero's Burai:The Knights of The Rounds:Suzaku:Knight of 0-Suzaku:Gloucester (Cornelia):Fortress Mode (Shinkiro):Shinkiro: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-SupernovA- Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Tip: Use real types; Warrior, Fiend, Spellcaster, Machine, Beast, Dragon, Aqua, Fairy, Insect, Rock, Winged Beast, Pyro, Beast-Warrior, Plant, Fish, Reptile, Thunder, Dinosaur, and Sea Serpent to give a short list. Not saying you have to, but I've seen quite a few people on the forum who prefer cards that they would actually be able to use in a duel without someone instantly realizing it's fake because the type doesn't exist. >_< I think your Pics are awesome and you put quite a bit of time into them, but they're overpowered. Also when you update your cards, post the new cards with the 1st post using the Edit button in the bottom of each of your posts. Things such as Attack Position, Defense Position, Normal Summon, Set , Ritual Summon , Special Summon, are capitalized. When saying a specific type of monster an effect is being used upon it would be Warrior-Type monster (Type is capitalized) When you have an effect like Gloucestor Cornelia's you can type it out like this;When this card is successfully Summoned, you may Special Summon 1 "Gloucestor", "Gloucestor (Guilford)", or "Gloucestor (Darlton)" from your hand or deck to the field. That's just stuff I got from skimming over your stuff and reading a little, I hope it helps. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camalie Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 okay I'll fix them tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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