{Galvantula} Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 im still quiet rubbish, thanks fighteronspeed for giving me help to keep its quality through uploading. :)well here it is, please rate and help fix errors.Level 5:Level 4 or lower: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fighteronspeed Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Great Cards and i like the shade and lighting that you have put in your images. the OCG on the cards is OK. a few little things like may = old OCG. and MACHINE type normally is Machine-Type but all in all I like the effects and the pics are good too. 9/10 for effort and keep it up. hope to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rampoh Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 First card is incredibly weak. Cards like Change of Heart, Brain Control and Jowls of Dark Demise can do the same effect for a much lower price. 8/10 for good art. I like your shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Galvantula} Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 The first card is weak because like the card "Dark Planet-Energy Lord" i have made in the next part of this set, there will be one like that for the first card.lol, this time i have resisted making a synchro for this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 pretty good job, the drawings are good....i like those cards!...10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 OCG is okay. At least I know what you mean. But the main thing that bothered me was your capitalization errors. You don't capitalize Types, just Attributes, you capitalize the whole name except words like the, of, and and when they are in the middle of a sentence, and you capitalize words like Summon and Tribute. The first effect is fine, but its worded really weird. The second effect is good and usable, just work on OCG. The third effect will get messy. The first effect of a monster can be a huge drawback or a huge advantage depending on the rest of the effect. And what about Fusion Monsters or Ritual Monsters? Their first effect are Summoning conditions. This one I'd scrap the effect. Images are pretty good if you did them yourself though, so points for that. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 they need work still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Galvantula} Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 third effect is made to have a disadvantage because the ones with summoning conditions usually have good effects, anyway, its used for another card in the next part of this set. if you search for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.T.B. Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 good like it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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