My First Card!

[The Destor]

This is my first cards! This is the start of a chain of cards that will be called "Rulers of the Ancient World" Here is the start of it!

Wait, how do i put in cards?

[Xenogears]

Click on the created card, copy the Link that apears under the card, paste here.

Simply, isn't it?

[The Destor]

Thnx! Here is the card, i will get the ritual in later!

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Oops! It says drak altar instead of dark altar! :)

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Here is the Ritual!

[Xenogears]

Kay, the OCG is bad, the 1st card MUST be lv 5...

4/10 cuz' you're new..

So I'll try to fix OCG

 

[spoiler=Sarhurst]

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The Dark Altar". Increase the ATK and DEF of this card for each card in both players Graveyard.

 

 

[spoiler=The dark altar]

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Sarhurst, the Destroyer of Life". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 5 or more from the field or your hand.

 

[The Destor]

Here is the next cards in my Rulers of the Ancient World pack

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Here is the fixed version, with the errors pointed out by Nero1010100

Sarhurst:

the death altar:

[Spirit of DMG]

Please post the new cards of your set in the original post. simply hit edit, pick one of the options, then add the image codes.

But, your improving, just follow the advice you're given, and make your sig make sense.

7/10

[gamemasterty]

it's ok

 

 

 

im back!