Cybertech card

[scotchkun]

My first card i made

cybertech are humans/creatures that r part machine

 

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No fake Types, please. Put he is a Machine. And you don't need to put Effect in. Tuner's are already Effect Monsters. Reasonable stats, but here is OCG to make your card how you want it.

 

This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. Once during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 Warrior-Type or Machine-Type monster. During the Battle Phase of this turn, this card can attack your opponent directly.

 

: )

 

Hope that helped. Pretty good for your First Card.

7.5/10

[Aero~]

efect should be:

 

This card is also treated as a Warrior- type monster. Once per turn, you can discard one card to have this card attack your opponent's life points directly.

 

make it 3 stars, no fake types, change it to machine, gat a color ppic, and 8/10. right now, 3/10

[fighteronspeed]

Nice one gratz on first card. 7/10

[scotchkun]

No fake Types' date=' please. Put he is a Machine. And you don't need to put Effect in. Tuner's are already Effect Monsters. Reasonable stats, but here is OCG to make your card how you want it.

 

This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. Once during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 Warrior-Type or Machine-Type monster. During the Battle Phase of this turn, this card can attack your opponent directly.

 

: )

 

Hope that helped. Pretty good for your First Card.

7.5/10

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Thanks for the advice and rate. Helps alot =)