naruto110 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Names have to be capitalized.horrible OCGpics are OK.For a new member ok.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 wow. you actually made errors in a Vannilla's description? 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Eh..... Dislike them..... Seem a little to.... Toyish.OCG needs to be fixed, let me get that for ya. Little Charger (That is how the name should be.)Machine (That is how the Type should be.) OCG: This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle as long as you control a face-up "Turbo Dino". You can Tribute this face-up card to Special Summon 1 Level 5 or Lower Machine-Type monster from your hand. The Vanilla needs more support. <.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 those pictures are mine, you have to give credit >.> OCG is bad(even the names and the description are bad). vanilla need support. -.- 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÐΛЯКЛΞSSКЛłGHТ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Ok to a newGive credit and use better grammarpics are cool but vannilla needs support and the other has OCG errors...Correction:If there is a face-up "Turbo Dino" on the field, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Give credit to Alcander for the pics >.< OCG fix: "While you control a face-up "Turbo Dino", this card cannot be destroyed by battle. You cand tribute this face-up monster to Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand." It's OPed cuz you can summon a Jinzo in the first turn :P, make it a Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster :P The vanilla isn't that bad but, it need more Support :P so 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÐΛЯКЛΞSSКЛłGHТ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Give credit to Alcander for the pics >.< OCG fix: "While you control a face-up "Turbo Dino"' date=' this card cannot be destroyed by battle. You cand tribute this face-up monster to Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand."[/b'] It's OPed cuz you can summon a Jinzo in the first turn :P, make it a Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster :P The vanilla isn't that bad but, it need more Support :P so 6/10You copyed my correction and just make more bad fixes :/Mine is right, you only changes he's whole effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Give credit to Alcander for the pics >.< OCG fix: "While you control a face-up "Turbo Dino"' date=' this card cannot be destroyed by battle. You cand tribute this face-up monster to Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand."[/b'] It's OPed cuz you can summon a Jinzo in the first turn :P, make it a Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster :P The vanilla isn't that bad but, it need more Support :P so 6/10You copyed my correction and just make more bad fixes :/Mine is right, you only changes he's whole effect Actually i do not change the whole effect... The effect is the same... I make the OCG correction as i know and as the OCG that i use... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Bad OCG, but good pics. Quite good for a new member. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 OCG and capitalization errors, though it's not that much, which is good for a new member you'll need to give some spell/trap support for the vanilla though 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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