Longest effect EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Aero~]

When this card is Normal Summoned, remove it from play. When this card is removed from play by it's own effect, place 1 Time Counter on each card on the field. When a monster with a Time Counter on it is destroyed, move the Time Counter onto this card. (max 5). you can remove 1 Time Counter from this card to place 2 Time Counters on 2 separate (No.) face-up monsters. You can remove 5 Time Counters from this card to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, remove 1 monster from both players' fields from play. If one of those monsters was a "Kichiwajima Mage", remove this card from play. When this card is removed from play in this way, remove 3 cards from both players' fields from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of the removed cards. Remove a counter from 1 of the cards each time a monster with Time Counter(s) on it is destroyed. When all of the removed cards have no Time Counters, return them to their original positions. If you can't, add 1 "Kichiwajima Mage" from your Deck to your hand and place 1 Time Counter on each of the cards that were removed by this card's effect, excluding "Kichiwajima Mage - White Purity". When this card is successfully Special Summoned, return all cards in the Graveyard to their respective owner's Decks, shuffle them, and remove the same amount of cards that were returned to the Deck by this card's effect from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of them. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove 1 Time Counter from 1 of the card's removed by this card's effect. When cards have been removed this way, and no removed from play cards have Time Counters on them, you win the Duel. If every card removed from play has a Time Counter on it, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Removed From Play Zone. If this card had 3 Time Counters on it and was Special Summoned in this way, remove from play every card on the field, except this card and place 1 Time Counter on each removed card except for 1 card of your opponent's choice. When you do this, this card cannot attack the turn it was Summoned. When this card attacks after this effect, on the third turn after it was Summoned, remove it from play and place 1 Kichiwajima Counter on every "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. Increase the ATK of each "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. When you do this, return every monster that is removed from play to the respective owner's Graveyards. Add the same amount of monsters returned this way to your Deck. Shuffle your Deck and pick up cards until you have the same amount of cards you returned to your Deck x2. Remove those cards from play and place 1 Time Counter on 5 of them. If you do this, you cannot win the Duel by having Time Counter(s) on each removed from play monster. If you have activated this effect and have at least 1 Time Counter on each card removed from play, monsters cannot be removed from play by this card's effect.

[ÐΛЯКЛΞSSКЛłGHТ]

All those letters kill me :/

It's nice, OCG iss a bit off but i'm to lazy to correct it

8/10

[disastermaster2000]

lolololololololololololololololololololol!!!!! I didn't read the entire effect so i give it a 8.5/10

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Oh heck no.... I'm not correcting this!!! xDDDD

Just some Minor OCG Errors I found.....

I read it over.... Kind of OVP'd in my opinion.....

This is irritating though. A long effect like this is not necessary to impress..... At least make it a story shorter....

6.5/10

[Aero~]

Oh heck no.... I'm not correcting this!!! xDDDD

Just some Minor OCG Errors I found.....

I read it over.... Kind of OVP'd in my opinion.....

This is irritating though. A long effect like this is not necessary to impress..... At least make it a story shorter....

6.5/10

I lol'ed. Also, it's supposed to be long. I'm pretty sure I hold the record now 8)

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Might as well write a story. Lmao. Nobody really appreciates the card though.... It's kind of.... Ya.

[~Chrono]

I fix'd that OCG, too long, so I probably slipped up a couple times.

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, remove it from play. When this card is removed from play by it's own effect, place 1 Time Counter on each card on the field. When a monster with a Time Counter on it is destroyed, move the Time Counter onto this card. (max 5). you can remove 1 Time Counter from this card to place 2 Time Counters on 2 separate face-up monsters. When You can remove 5 Time Counters from this card to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, remove 1 monster from both players' fields from play. If one of those monsters was a "Kichiwajima Mage", remove this card from play. When this card is removed from play in this way, remove 3 cards from both players' fields from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of the removed cards. Remove a counter from 1 of the cards each time a monster with Time Counter(s) on it is destroyed. When all of the removed cards have 0 Time Counters, return them to their original positions. If you can't, add one "Kichiwajima Mage" from your Deck to your hand and place 1 Time Counter on each of the cards that were removed by this card's effect, excluding "Kichiwajima Mage - White Purity". When this card is successfully Special Summoned, return all cards in the graveyard to their respective owner's Decks, shuffle them, and remove the same amount of cards that were returned to the Deck by this card's effect from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of them. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove 1 Time Counter from 1 of the card's removed by this card's effect. When cards have been removed this way, and no removed from play cards have Time Counters on them, you win the duel. If every card removed from play has a time counter on it, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Removed From Play Zone. If this card had 3 Time Counters on it and was Special Summoned this way, remove from play every card on the field except this card and place 1 Time Counter on each removed card except for one card of your opponent's choice. When you do this, this card cannot attack the turn it was summoned. When this card attacks after this effect, on the third turn after it was summoned, remove it from play and place 1 Kichiwajima Counter on every "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. Increase the ATK of each "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. When you do this, return every monster that is removed from play to the respective owner's Graveyards. Add the same amount of monsters returned this way to your deck. Shuffle your deck and pick up cards until you have the same amount of cards you returned to your Deck x2. Remove those cards from play and place 1 Time Counter on 5 of them. If you do this, you cannot win the duel by having Time Counter(s) on each removed from play monster.If you have activated this effect and have at least one Time Counter on each card removed from play, monsters cannot be removed from play by this card's effect.

 

The bold confuses me, by how much? I think I know what your getting at, but the card confuses me. a little OP'd. OCG errors, Confusing lore. 7/10

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EDIT: Oh god, this is part of an Archetype. :/

[◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊]

I fix'd that OCG' date=' too long, so I probably slipped up a couple times.

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, remove it from play. When this card is removed from play by it's own effect, place 1 Time Counter on each card on the field. When a monster with a Time Counter on it is destroyed, move the Time Counter onto this card. (max 5). you can remove 1 Time Counter from this card to place 2 Time Counters on 2 [b']separate (No.)[/b] face-up monsters. You can remove 5 Time Counters from this card to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, remove 1 monster from both players' fields from play. If one of those monsters was a "Kichiwajima Mage", remove this card from play. When this card is removed from play in this way, remove 3 cards from both players' fields from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of the removed cards. Remove a counter from 1 of the cards each time a monster with Time Counter(s) on it is destroyed. When all of the removed cards have no Time Counters, return them to their original positions. If you can't, add 1 "Kichiwajima Mage" from your Deck to your hand and place 1 Time Counter on each of the cards that were removed by this card's effect, excluding "Kichiwajima Mage - White Purity". When this card is successfully Special Summoned, return all cards in the Graveyard to their respective owner's Decks, shuffle them, and remove the same amount of cards that were returned to the Deck by this card's effect from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of them. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove 1 Time Counter from 1 of the card's removed by this card's effect. When cards have been removed this way, and no removed from play cards have Time Counters on them, you win the Duel. If every card removed from play has a Time Counter on it, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Removed From Play Zone. If this card had 3 Time Counters on it and was Special Summoned in this way, remove from play every card on the field, except this card and place 1 Time Counter on each removed card except for 1 card of your opponent's choice. When you do this, this card cannot attack the turn it was Summoned. When this card attacks after this effect, on the third turn after it was Summoned, remove it from play and place 1 Kichiwajima Counter on every "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. Increase the ATK of each "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. When you do this, return every monster that is removed from play to the respective owner's Graveyards. Add the same amount of monsters returned this way to your Deck. Shuffle your Deck and pick up cards until you have the same amount of cards you returned to your Deck x2. Remove those cards from play and place 1 Time Counter on 5 of them. If you do this, you cannot win the Duel by having Time Counter(s) on each removed from play monster. If you have activated this effect and have at least 1 Time Counter on each card removed from play, monsters cannot be removed from play by this card's effect.

 

The bold confuses me, by how much? I think I know what your getting at, but the card confuses me. a little OP'd. OCG errors, Confusing lore. 7/10

 

I fixed whatever I saw wrong in his, and other than that, everything was right.... That was a long use of my time.

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

Omfg. I didn't bother to read the effect cuz it's way too long for me. I think you've broken a world record.

Ed:The pic holo(?) looks a bit strange.

[~Chrono]

I fix'd that OCG' date=' too long, so I probably slipped up a couple times.

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, remove it from play. When this card is removed from play by it's own effect, place 1 Time Counter on each card on the field. When a monster with a Time Counter on it is destroyed, move the Time Counter onto this card. (max 5). you can remove 1 Time Counter from this card to place 2 Time Counters on 2 [b']separate (No.)[/b] face-up monsters. You can remove 5 Time Counters from this card to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, remove 1 monster from both players' fields from play. If one of those monsters was a "Kichiwajima Mage", remove this card from play. When this card is removed from play in this way, remove 3 cards from both players' fields from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of the removed cards. Remove a counter from 1 of the cards each time a monster with Time Counter(s) on it is destroyed. When all of the removed cards have no Time Counters, return them to their original positions. If you can't, add 1 "Kichiwajima Mage" from your Deck to your hand and place 1 Time Counter on each of the cards that were removed by this card's effect, excluding "Kichiwajima Mage - White Purity". When this card is successfully Special Summoned, return all cards in the Graveyard to their respective owner's Decks, shuffle them, and remove the same amount of cards that were returned to the Deck by this card's effect from play. Place 1 Time Counter on each of them. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, remove 1 Time Counter from 1 of the card's removed by this card's effect. When cards have been removed this way, and no removed from play cards have Time Counters on them, you win the Duel. If every card removed from play has a Time Counter on it, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Removed From Play Zone. If this card had 3 Time Counters on it and was Special Summoned in this way, remove from play every card on the field, except this card and place 1 Time Counter on each removed card except for 1 card of your opponent's choice. When you do this, this card cannot attack the turn it was Summoned. When this card attacks after this effect, on the third turn after it was Summoned, remove it from play and place 1 Kichiwajima Counter on every "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. Increase the ATK of each "Kichiwajima Mage" monster you control. When you do this, return every monster that is removed from play to the respective owner's Graveyards. Add the same amount of monsters returned this way to your Deck. Shuffle your Deck and pick up cards until you have the same amount of cards you returned to your Deck x2. Remove those cards from play and place 1 Time Counter on 5 of them. If you do this, you cannot win the Duel by having Time Counter(s) on each removed from play monster. If you have activated this effect and have at least 1 Time Counter on each card removed from play, monsters cannot be removed from play by this card's effect.

 

The bold confuses me, by how much? I think I know what your getting at, but the card confuses me. a little OP'd. OCG errors, Confusing lore. 7/10

 

I fixed whatever I saw wrong in his, and other than that, everything was right.... That was a long use of my time.

Thanks, usually I get can fix OCG quite perfectly, but it wasn't a lore. It was a wall of text.

 

ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED:

Effect King.

[◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊]

ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED:

Effect King.

 

Lolsaywut??? Whose Effect King? xD

[Aero~]

me. I'm effect king. Thanks, Narasa.

[◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊]

Lol. Truly you are.... That was the most amazing shiz I've ever seen.... The OCG just killed it.... ._.

No offense.

[Aero~]

can you suggest any fixes if the OCG kils it? It would seel crazy in today's meta.

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a kichiwajima mage is an archetype I made.

[Lord Smeagle]

tl;dr. 1/10:

 

for being pretentious and overreaching. Also, you're negged.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Psyche.

 

The effect confuses the hell out of me, and I would have to see the rest of your archetype and how it plays before I could really give a detailed rating. It sounds like these guys would either be really fun to play or horribly annoying, but 8.2/10. OCG hurt you a lot.

 

Merry Christmas!

[ragnarok1945]

and it's only lv8? With 6000 atk that's way too low for the level, it needs to be lv12

 

it's going to hell on you to edit the OCG when you look at the OCG thread though

 

7.5/10

[Aero~]

well, it's lv 8, but it's hard to get it out anyway.

[Free Style]

I'll just give it 8.5/10. Too long. LOL.

[JG.]

That's not a good thing.

[Dark Mousy]

BIG WALL OF TEXT THAT I AM NOT GOING TO READ!

 

Srsly. It's not a good thing.

[gustavosuarez]

well, the effect is long, very very long. im tired to read all the effect. you can do at least 5 cards with that effect. the pics seems a little blurry, maybe for the holo you do for it. the effect is good, but very confusing. i give you a 8/10 only for christmas:)

[Aero~]

Just asking- what would it be off of Cristmas? For some reason, pics turn out blurry when I use them, but when other people make cards, thier pics turn out perfect.

[Rusty Shovel]

Nope not reading.

 

 

FINE I READ IT. xD

 

Some OCG errors, seems slightly OP'ed otherwise pretty good.

 

9/10

[Sander]

...

 

This is the forum for Realistic cards.

 

*Looks at the card*

 

YEP, TOTALLY REALISTIC.[/sarcasm]

[Metal Skull]

Don't wanna read such ting

But pic is bad