Kyubii - Fire God

[[P]hoeniX]

Hello Everyone

this is my first card

is a Fire God synchro, a bijuu synchro, and a synchro in the fire beasts deck (the series of cards im doing)

 

 

1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monster

When this card is Synchro Summoned, place 9 Tail Counters on it. This card level is equal to the number of Tail Counter on it.This card gains 300 ATK for each Tail Counter on it. You can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on the field, except this card, after this remove Tail counter equal to the number of cards destroyed. While this monster has no Tail Counters on it, it is destroyed and sent to the graveyard.

 

Ciao

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

Hi and Welcome.

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[Demon Eyes Kyo]

NIce card welcome nice pic balanced nice concept minor ocg

8.2/10

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

Very nice for a first. The pic is amazing. It seems more like a Fire Hound than a god IMO. Also would you mind posting the lore(text).

[Demon Eyes Kyo]

=Naruto nine-tailed fox=pop culture

[[P]hoeniX]

thanks

and done,

how i Hide the things if i can ask?

 

By the way, where you see "naruto" on the card,

the Bijuu war tale is a completely diferent thing, and in the tale the kyubii no hyouko(?) is a god of fire,

 

Ciao

[Silver]

Hey man, welcome to the site.

I like the idea, it's a good idea.

One thing I would say is to lower the 700 base ATK to 0, otherwise it's too powerful, ya know?

Cheers, Silver.

[[P]hoeniX]

thanks

is a level 9 synchro so i think a total of 3500 is not too much, and 2700 is realy nothing (think about goyo), and anyway, you will "burn" the tail right???

[ParadoxDuelist]

Try this:

1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned you can place 9 Tail Counters on it. This monster's Level is equal to the number of Tail Counters on it. This monster gains 300 ATK for each Tail Counter on this monster. Once per turn you can remove 1 Tail Counter from a card you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. While this monster has no Tail Counters on it, it is destroyed and sent to the graveyard.

 

Overall nice card. Love the idea, 8/10 (4/5)

[[P]hoeniX]

Thanks again

N done,

the stats are really high?, and just "Send to the graveyard" is not bad?

 

Ciao

[◎Kaleidoscope]

Very cool card for a beginner, but honestly, you need another drawback to make the card less OP (overpowered).

[Azmodius]

Pop culture plox. Tis great for a newbie. I like it. But, it's naruto, so pop culture pl0x.

[TenThousandFists]

I like. I take it you also make Fire Beast monsters. I would like to see more of them.

[Guest Zeonark]

=Naruto nine-tailed fox=pop culture

 

Pop culture plox. Tis great for a newbie. I like it. But' date=' it's naruto, so pop culture pl0x.

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If you two would stop watching Naruto, you'd see that the picture has nothing to do with Naruto. It's just named "Kyuubi".

 

OCG has been fixed already. I love the picture. But I find it kinda ironic that it's stepping in water...if that is water. Level 9 and 9 Counters...even more ironic. Excellent job for someone new. Even though I'm nearly as new as you. Plus, it doesn't seem OP'd. 3500 ATK and when you destroy a monster, it drops 300 ATK. Waste the effect, you lose the monster. Pretty balanced to me.

 

10/10.

[[P]hoeniX]

thanks

 

huahahaha i did not see the water, i swear. n its a little strange if i think about.

about the drawback, i cant think about only two that will not make this card a Lvl9 Synchro useless:

 

You can remove 1 Tail Counter from a card you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

You can remove 1 Tail Counter from this card to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

 

N add something like, this card cannot be used as synchro material, or be tributed for both effects and advanced summon.

 

ciao

[wero-vasto]

It isn't OPed and is a Synchro so it needs to a little OPed u.u

 

Kyuubi is realistic, it's not NARUTO :P

 

it's good for me :P jeje

 

Good Effect :P

 

so 8.6/10

[SuperSusanoo]

Yeah its a good card

and the Kyuubi doesn't come from Naruto it came from the ancient myth of the kitsunes

8.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

had it not been for the loss of atk when a counter is lost, this would have been very OPed

 

still, the effect of removing a tail counter to destroy a card your opponent controls is still a bit OPed, because you didn't say when you can activate that effect, nor did you say how often per turn you can do that

 

8/10

[[P]hoeniX]

oh

about that

first i have the idea of once per turn, but is just too slow (have u ever play agaist a JD), 3 times a turn is not bad but just complicate the thing, so ... u cant destroy every card on opponet field, (just like JD) but if u destroy 2 u have a atk of 2900 and keep on going down, so i think is fair, but if everyone else thinks is a little OP, i can add some damaging or cost, like 300 LP per Tail.

ciao

[賢狼ホロ]

1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monster

When this card is Synchro Summoned, place 9 "Tail Counters" on it. This card level is equal to the number of Tail Counter on it.This card gains 300 ATK for each Tail Counter on it. You can remove 1 Tail Counter from a card you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. While this monster has no Tail Counters on it, it is destroyed and sent to the graveyard.

 

You should add quotation marks to Tail Counters as it is specific counters. (Right?)

Tail Counters -> "Tail Counters"

I do not know what the point of the level decrease is, but anyway, why not.

Probably you should add, "Once per turn you can remove 1 "Tail Counter" from this card [...]", in order to make sure you cannot clear the field in one turn. It is not necessary to write "and sent to the Graveyard".

 

 

1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monster

When this card is Synchro Summoned' date=' place 9 "Tail Counters" on it. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Tail Counter" on it. Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Tail Counter" from this card to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this card has no "Tail Counters" on it, it is destroyed.

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I am not sure about the last sentence.

 

Great card. I am not fond of the name, though, but it is not really a problem. Picture is great, as well as the text, effect is good, overall a great card.

 

2/3 (Great)

[-DOOM]

lol why should this be naruto?? Is there a Naruto in the card? and the pic seems very realistic to me, so the pic is very good and fitting.

 

Effect is OP. 9 Tail counters? that means you can destroy 9!! cards in 1 turn, which is too much. I would add something like "thrice/twice per turn".

 

Overall pretty nice card, 9/10

[archie17]

3500 ATK and 9 Mystical Space Typhoon cards in one = OVERPOWERED. Need to revise and the pic is from Naruto, but its ambiguious so it can slide in the Realistic Section although I can see a water mark in it.

 

Effect - 5/10 too over powered, need to revise

Pic - 5/10 is considered pop but its ok, watermark shown

 

Overall 5/10

[[P]hoeniX]

thanks by the rate

for tail "quotes"

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Arcanite_Magician

so i dont know, and once i hope to do others Bijuu cards the tail counter is something that i may use later, (probaly not in the same deck, but...)

the nine-tails lvl 9 and the destruction part is all togheter, if have no tail, its level is zero, so cannot exist on the field, and about the why decrese level, we have this one "GOD" too

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tragoedia

and thats the thing about, U CAN CLEAR THE FIELD, JD can, Reshef?(the best ritual ever) can, so why kyubii cant? and the thing is if u abused of this effect u do little damage, and i prefer to add "the turn u activated this effect u cant atack" and not "once per turn"

the last part is something strage, but the most uses on the OCG are destroy and send to the grave, in the fist i just put "send to the grave" but someone say that is better the way is now, so...

oh, about the tail effect is something about the tale, is said that whit one swing of a tail the kyubii can do a lot damage, so i pick the effect cuz of this.

ciao

[-DOOM]

to balance this card, use "Twice/ thrice per turn you can remove......." and write "1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monster". ths will make it more balanced.

 

@Fantomcore: Where did you see this pic in naruto? maybe it's Naruto Fan art, but to me the pic looks like Fox-like Beast with 9 tailes. For the Naruto Kyubi, the creature in the card is way too small.

[archie17]

to balance this card' date=' use "Twice/ thrice per turn you can remove......." and write "1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monster". ths will make it more balanced.

 

@Fantomcore: Where did you see this pic in naruto? maybe it's Naruto Fan art, but to me the pic looks like Fox-like Beast with 9 tailes. For the Naruto Kyubi, the creature in the card is way too small.

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Its probably fan-art of the Nine-Tailed Beast from Naruto. Its still acceptable to me either way, it works, so its okay to be in the Realistic Section.