Arceuz Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 These cards are actually the idea of red eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 OCG on Cyber Metal is fine, but is that it's only effect? No ATK gain or anything? The chick seems fine. Starlight is overpowered. I'd give it some summoning costs. If it's like Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon, fix it to where you have to tribute the Black Eyes White Gryphon to Special Summon it. Oh, and your spelling needs some work bud. D: Winged-Beast needs to have caps in the right places. Fixes:Cyber Metal:You can only equip this to a face-up "Black Eyes White Gryphon". Black Eyes Gryphon Chick: (Not a OCG fix. Just a spelling fix.)By sending this card from the field to the graveyard, you can Special Summon one "Black Eyes White Gryphon" from your hand. Black Eyes Starlight Gryphon:This monster gains 400 ATK for each WIND monster in your graveyard. Cyber Ultimate Gryphon: (Last sentence is changed to make it a bit more balanced for you. Where's Ultimate Gryphon though?)This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a face-up "Ultimate Gryphon" equipped with "Cyber Metal". This monster can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once per turn. Don't need to fix Gryphon return. But I don't think there's a Counter Spell. I'd change it to a Quick-Play Spell. These can be good. But they need some originality. It's just Red-Eyes at this point. C'mon. Fix 'em up for us. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I Totally agree :3 you can make it more original :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arceuz Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Thanks I am actually bad on spellings and I am a little bit rush.Oh and the Cyber Ultimate Gryphon is a card I created weeks ago, so i din't realy care.HeheheheI acidentelly forgot all about that Ultimate Gryphon and i created all this card except Cyber Ultimate GryphonI acidentelly forgot all about that Ultimate Gryphon and i created all this card except Cyber Ultimate GryphonSorry for my spellings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 the OCG correction is already up Starlight Gryphon needs more effects The same is true for Ultimate Gryphon, plus you didn't say it can't be Normal Summoned, which makes it OPed 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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