Spirit of DMG Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I like the concept (it sure beats all of the anime cards out there), but the execution was poor. First, Gibbs is far too powerful; he can basically bulldoze any deck with enough time and NCIS cards (which you haven't yet created), and even then, he could smash most monsters on his own. Second, Abby is also too powerful; if her effect increased her attack by about 300 or so, and if her original attack was reduced, it would be less OP'd. Third, avoid fake types. They may be cool, but even on the Pop Culture section, people are pretty picky with the OCG. I can almost guarantee someone named FusionXD will be here later. Pay attention to him; he should help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Thank you. May I have a rating, please?(Once more thing: I'm the Fake Queen, so get used to the Fake Types.)Thanks for the suggestions, I may alter Gibbs's effect to have more of a drawback than difficulty and time, and I'll lower Abby's original ATK.EDIT: Updated Both cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I'd give it about 4/10. It's not terrible, and I like the concept, but it needs much work. As for the fake type thing, I guess I'll just cope with it... Just keep an eye out for FusionXD. He helps a lot with this sort of thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 um wow, do i have a rep on here? w/e, thank u tho jaegarcards needs an apostrophe in the synchro,i cud be wrong, but instead of 7 "NCIS" monsters with different names, id do 7 different "NCIS" monsterslowercase Field and put an apostrophe in opponents2nd card is fine, 1st card maybe lower it to 10 or 15, 20's like half the deck, or maybe for every 5 cards removed pay 1000 Life Points and that way u remove however many u want within reason?hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 yes, it does. I'll make it 10 then. thats what, 200 Life points per card? Sounds fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 um wow' date=' do i have a rep on here? w/e, thank u tho jaegar[/quote'] You're quite welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 1st Card: Field has a lowercase "f".2nd Card: What level is it supposed to be, -3 or -6? And is it supposed to be a Dark Synchro?If it is a Dark Synchro, is should be Dark Tuner, not Anti-Tuner. And the correct heading for the Dark Synchro would be:1 Synchro Monster - 1 Dark Tuner If it isn't a Dark Synchro, my bad. I like the cards, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Abby is an Anti-Synchro. A Fake Sub-type invented by me. and, Her level is 6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Abby is an Anti-Synchro. A Fake Sub-type invented by me. and' date=' Her level is 6.[/quote'] Gotcha. Then it's fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 And DiNozzo is the Vanilla Anti-Tuner of the group Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 UPDATE BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benoit4ever Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 We need a Gibbslap! And they're "OK". I like them, seeing as I love NCIS, but they could use some improvement. Minor OCG errors [some mentioned], and maybe some better effects? Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Lights, Camera, Update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Another Update. Ziva's next, lemme know if theres someone you want to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Harharhar! I won't say that the pictures are lifelike as tjse are Pop Culture Cards. Not familiar with this show. I don't know. But some effects just make me laugh.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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