Domi the Mystery Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 [align=center]As title says, this is my first Gold Rare. My friend learned me how to make it! Hope you like it! [spoiler=Fiquat and Tuner] [spoiler=Lore]''Xyntum, Machiner of the Ultimate Valley'' + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon or by it's own effect. When this card is Synchro Summoned, put 5 Ultimate Counters on this card (max.5). You can remove Ultimate Counter from this card to discard cards from your hand equal to the number of Ultimate Counters you removed. Then your opponent must send cards from the top of their Deck to the Graveyard equal to the number of Counters removed by this effect. If there are no Ultimate Counters on this card, destroy it. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field with 0 ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, your opponent takes 1000 points of damage.I also made a Tuner for it!:)[spoiler=Lore]You can Special Summon this card from your hand, by removing from play 1 ''Ultimate Valley'' monster in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, you can put 1 Ultimate counter on this card.(max. 1) When this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, you can remove 1 Ultimate counter from this card, to destroy the monster without applying damage calculation. If there are no Ultimate counters on this card, this card loses 300 ATK. Pics from Jazin Kay's gallery![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Very good for a first try!Good job ;)You learned well, i didn't knew i was so good at teachingBut needs some name holo fixesPS: This sjould be at showcase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Making your monster's names golden with ridiculous special effects is NOT making cards look fancy. God. This card can only be Special Summoned by a Synchro Summoned and by its own effect. When this card is Synchro Summoned put 5 Ultimate counters on this card (max. 5). You can remove 1 Ultimate counter from this card' date=' to discard 1 card from your hand and your opponent must send equal number of cards from the top of his Deck to the Graveyard. When there are no Ultimate Counters on this card, destroy it. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon this card to your opponnent's side of the field with 0 ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/quote'] Not sure if that Deck top part is correct, so I couldn't fix it. Lovin' the picture. Can't even read the name though. The card looks good, Gold Rare wise. Effect seems somewhat balanced, can't fully tell. Atleast you kept up the Fire tradition with Burn Damage. 8D Meh.8.5/10 ...You did mean to show off the monster, not the holo right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 ...You did mean to show off the monster' date=' not the holo right?[/quote'] Well... Both. And tnx for rating. I have the card in my Ultimate Valley set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 You holoed the name so much I can't even read it. Gold Rare and image holo looks good The 1st part of your effect negates your card's ability to be Special Summoned with 0 ATK and DEF. You also didn't mention how this card can be Synchro Summoned through it's own effect, you just said it can ony be Synchro Summoned through it's own effect. Counter is capitalized. You say you can remove 1 Counter to discard 1 card. Then just simply state that your opponent must send 1 card from the top of his/her Deck to the Graveyard. Your effect doesn't flow at all 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 My friend... This card can only be Synchro Summoned and by its own effect. Its AND by its own effect!! Read more carefully next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 It should say This card can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon or its own effect.Too much holo on the name.Gold rare is good.Pic is great.Effect is good.OCG is pretty good.8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Well, thanx for rating. There isn't really too much holo on the name, its cuz Gold writing don't fit to Synchros. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 I rated this in that other thread of yours already, Domi. Don't know why you put the card up again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 My friend... This card can only be Synchro Summoned and by its own effect. Its AND by its own effect!! Read more carefully next time. Then it should be "This card can only be Synchro Summoned and SPECIAL SUMMONED by its own effect." Be more specific next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 My friend... This card can only be Synchro Summoned and by its own effect. Its AND by its own effect!! Read more carefully next time. Then it should be "This card can only be Synchro Summoned and SPECIAL SUMMONED by its own effect." Be more specific next time. OK! I will be! :)And ragnarok, i wanted to show off my Gold Rare, cuz there are more ppls viewing this thread, than ultimate valley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon or by it's own effect. When this card is Synchro Summoned, put 5 Ultimate Counters on this card (max.5). You can remove Ultimate Counter from this card to discard cards from your hand equal to the number of Ultimate Counters you removed. Then your opponent must send cards from the top of their Deck to the Graveyard equal to the number of Counters removed by this effect. If there are no Ultimate Counters on this card, destroy it. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field with 0 ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, your opponent takes 1000 points of damage. needed further correction.effect is ok, could work in a milling deck. this + needle worms + necroface etc.. you forget to add the 1 Tuner + etc... which is bad.change the name back to normal because as is, it is too hard to read.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Tnx for comment, but i wont change it. Its just an example of my first gold rare. Maybe i'll go make a Pink Rare card! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 at least change the ocg. you have many errors.your even missing the standard synchro line Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Awesome pic!IDK who Jazin Kay is but I am getting his images! The rest is pretty nice,8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Ummm... Sepiroth, i forgot to put the Synchro line up. :DI even made a Tuner for it and then i forgot. EDIT:I will make this thread a showcase of my Gold Rares! :)EDIT2: There is the tuner and edited Dragon with easier name reading and corrected effect! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 BUMMMMPPP!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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