First Cards

[Failure]

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Death Marked - Eurydice". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more from the field or your hand.

 

This card must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. This card is not destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally). If a monster battles with another monster, destroy it after the Damage Step. This card cannot attack if you control more than 3 monsters. Decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points during each of your End Phases, when the ATK of this card is 0, destroy this card.

 

Comment and Critique.

[bighope]

for a ritual monster you have to say that you must use the ritual summon card in the effect

 

Example: this monster can only be ritual summoned by (insert card name hear)

 

im happy to be your first critic...or at least one of the first.

[JARVISD09]

not bad, just kind of sucks if you have a bunch of monsters out its like wasting the sacrifice.

[Ninja165]

They are really good for your first cards. And I've seen the 2nd pic on deviantart, that's funny :).

[PikMan]

Fairly good effect, but underpowered. I'll give it a C.

[Sorrow.]

It is under powered if you play it wrong, you could always put 2 ATK Up Equip Cards to it.

 

By itself is underpower but if playeed properly it is good.

 

5/10

 

Not bad..

[dr4g0n12]

I would increase the attack of death marked-eurydice

[ragnarok1945]

ritual a little UPed, raise the stats up a little higher given its level

 

especially since it loses atk anyway

 

7/10

[Failure]

for a ritual monster you have to say that you must use the ritual summon card in the effect

 

Example: this monster can only be ritual summoned by (insert card name hear)

 

im happy to be your first critic...or at least one of the first.

 

No you don't.

 

Check relinquished. It's only for cards that you don't want to ritual summon with something like advanced ritual art.

 

As far as the effect goes. I made it so it was like the greek legend, Orfeo and Eurydice.

[Lord Smeagle]

Good in an Equip Deck, pretty UP'd elsewhere...but I'd totally build a deck around it.

 

If you lowered its level, it'd be fair game for Ritual Weapon.

[Aero~]

bad OCG 7/10

[Metal Skull]

Pretty nice for first cards

Your OCG isn't good but it's not suprising since you're new

1st pic is ok, 2nd is meh

Good job anyway, just try improving your OCG...check the OCG thread

7/10 ;)

[wero-vasto]

Good in an Equip Deck' date=' pretty UP'd elsewhere...but I'd totally build a deck around it.

 

If you lowered its level, it'd be fair game for Ritual Weapon.

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This ^^

 

8/10

[Akumakagemaru]

I'd say 6/10. Good attempt, creative, but yes, underpowered considering the level and the inherant ATK loss. And I thought Advanced Ritual Art ws for normal Ritual Monsters...? Eh, I could be wrong. All in all though, not bad for a newbie.

[Failure]

I like how this how people react.

 

I am Dark Mousy from: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-177388.html

 

As far as I know, the OCG is perfect, I've checked it numerous times.

 

Even if it wasn't, I shouldn't be deserving:

 

I'd say 6/10. Good attempt' date=' creative, but yes, underpowered considering the level and the inherant ATK loss. And I thought Advanced Ritual Art ws for normal Ritual Monsters...? Eh, I could be wrong. All in all though, not bad for a newbie.

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bad OCG 7/10

 

As far as I know. You all deserve to be funked.

 

Just because I lose my password the third time now...

 

You blow up your opponent's entire funking field twice. Clears the field for direct attack. It can be summoned via other non-specific Ritual Cards ex. Contract with the Abyss. Very easy OTK, given current metagame.

 

I'm unsure why it is underpowered.

[Optikz]

i'm not a fan of ritual monsters but this card is pretty cool.