First Card [False Face]

[Aequitas]

[align=center]Hi, this is my first card, and I hope you like it. I tried to make it original, but I'll leave it up to you to see if you think that way. It did some research in this forum to see how you want the card presented, so the OCG should be okay.

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]

Pay 1000 life points. Select 1 face up monster your opponent controls. Without changing its position, flip it face down. Then select 1 monster from your hand and place it face up on top of your opponent's face down monster, in the same position as the face down monster. Neither the face-up or face-down monster can attack and are treated as Normal Monsters. If the face-down monster would be destroyed by battle or a card effect, destroy the face-up monster on top of it instead. (Your opponent stills receives battle damage if the monster is destroyed by battle, based on the face up monster's attack or defense.) If the face-up monster is destroyed, flip the face-down monster up.

 

 

 

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[wero-vasto]

face up = face-up

face down = face-down

 

 

interesting effect ...

 

so 8.6/10

[Lord Smeagle]

I won't even try to comment on OCG, since there's no precedent.

 

Effect is good and quite abusable. You could use this to get off a killer attack by planting a Spirit Reaper from your hand onto your opponent's LV 8 whatever, and then run it over with a big monster for massive damage. Or use it to negate something your opponent has, I dunno.

 

Pic is good, effect is highly original. Can't really complain. Amazing for a new member. 10/10.

[Aequitas]

Thanks for the reviews, and once I get a chance, I'll change the mistake I made.

[Cloister]

Fix:

Pay 1000 Life Points. Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Without changing its Position, flip it face-down. Then select 1 monster from your hand and place it face-up on top of your opponent's face-down monster, in the same Position as the face-down monster. The face-up monster cannot attack and both monsters are treated as a Normal Monsters. If the face-down monster would be destroyed by battle or by a card's effect, destroy the face-up monster on top of it instead (Battle Damage is applied normally). If the face-up monster is destroyed, flip the face-down monster into face-up Attack Position.

 

Really unique effect for a Level 1 member

 

Fixed OCG so it's correct

 

Well, welcome to YCM and 8.8/10 :D

[Lexadin]

Nice pic, the OCG correction is already given.

Effect is good and not OP or UP.

A great card, the only thing is that the name is a bit plain.

A 9.2/10, nice card if you're really new.

[ExtremeG]

It's achually a really interesting effect. Very original, and simplistic to getting a powerful monster out of the way and replacing it with a weaker one. Some OCG errors.

 

Awsome for a new member!

 

9.0/10

[Aequitas]

Thanks for the further corrections of the OCG.

[Hrash0]

Insane for the first card. Since the OCG fixes have been given...

10/10.

AND you get a rep for genius.

[Aequitas]

Thanks for the rep.

[ragnarok1945]

the OCG correction is already up

 

was never that much to begin with, which is great for an early card, so I'll rate this 9.8/10

[Aequitas]

Thanks for the review.

[Aequitas]

Bump.