Seekers of Vengeance {♣} All Monster Prequel {♣} Seekers of Vengeance

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[align=center]I started a new set, think I should continue? Most of the effects should be readable, I toned down the amount I usually write;)

The Seekers of Vengeance

 

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"Vengeful Healer" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

If your opponent Synchro Summons a monster with 2800 or more ATK, you can pay 1000 Life Points to pick up the top card in your Extra Deck and put it in your hand. The monster is now treated as an Effect Monster. When this card is destroyed, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 Level 3 monster from your Deck or Graveyard.

 

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This card cannot be removed from play. While this card is in your control, both players cannot Normal Summon or Set monsters. Each turn, increase both players Life Points by an amount equal to the number of Monster Cards they control x350. When this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, increase this card's original DEF by 600 for the remainder of the Duel.

 

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Creator's Note:

'Vengeful Palace' is a Field Spell I'm working on :)

 

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[Aequitas]

These are pretty good, and yes, I think you should make a set. Most of the effects are original, and the pics are pretty cool.

 

9/10.

[wero-vasto]

I like the idea but this:

 

"When this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, increase this card's DEF by 600."

 

If it is destroyed, why i would increase it's def in the Graveyard?

 

 

so 8.7/10

[Lord Smeagle]

Just one complaint - Vengeful Veiled Warper gains 600 DEF when it's destroyed? Does that mean it gains 600 DEF in the Graveyard?

 

Other than that these are good, but I can't really rate until I've seen more of the set.

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A lot of effects in this set will involve cards coming back from the Graveyard...

[wero-vasto]

but even if you return the monster, it will have it's original ATK and DEF

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but even if you return the monster' date=' it will have it's original ATK and DEF

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Good point, I'll tweak the effect to make it more understandable by adding "for the remainder of the duel"

[wero-vasto]

Or "Increase this card original ATK blablabla

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Anybody else care to comment/critique :)

[Lexadin]

Interesting effects.

The pics are great. The names are ok.

OGC is fine.

A 9/10

[wero-vasto]

with the changes now i raise my rate!

 

so 9/10

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Interesting effects.

The pics are great. The names are ok.

OGC is fine.

A 9/10

 

Thnx to both of you, but Lexadin, wats not great about the names?

[ragnarok1945]

Warper is the only one who's effect doesn't make sense

 

why would it gain def while it's in the graveyard?

 

9/10

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Because many effects in this set will involve bringing back cards from the Graveyard (Vengeance) so this card will become stronger.