naruto110 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 this credit for the pic goes to alcander Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 OCG fix:"While this card is face-up, inflict 800 of damage for each Trap Card your opponent activates" 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Its good but your missing some key things like:"As long as this card is Face-up on the field, each Trap card your Plays inflict 800 Life Points of Damage."8/10Your geting better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 wero-vasto already pointed out the OCG errors certainly better than the previous ones, but it still only gets 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 It's good:-Card Name and Type needs capitalization "Trap Reaper"-Nice image-The effect is fair, but has some errors. Here's a fixed version:"As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if your opponent activates a Trap Card, he/she takes 800 damage."-Stats are balanced when combined with the effect. It's pretty good! For it being balanced and having a relevant image, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 I likeh the pic, but render doesn't blends with the bg :/Anyway way too simple effect, give anotherOCG is bad, put has been corrected already6/10Crap, please make the 1st letter of every word on a card name capitalized, pleaseAnd also do that on the type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 -The effect is fair' date=' but has some errors. Here's a fixed version:"[i']As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if your opponent activates a Trap Card, he/she takes 800 damage."[/i] No. That's wrong too. As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points when he/she activates a trap cad.[/quote'] Anti-Uria support. I like it. Balanced and everything. 8D7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 "Inflict 800 damage to your opponent each time your opponent activates a Trap Card." "As long as" in texts is implied these days, unless it's specific. Because logically, that continuous effect wouldn't be active if it were face-down or not even summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grimmjow ah Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 not bad i give it a6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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