recono17 Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 My first 2 cards if u gave me a score can u leave a comment on how i can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cold Assassin Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Cards need work but your new so..GOOD JOB! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Creative and not OP'd. Nice for your first try. I'm kinda new here too, but they just have bad wording. Actually, the second one's effect seems UP'd. I think you should add parts to it that make it like one of the Sacred Beasts/Wicked/Egyptian Gods. Like 3 tributes and cannot be Special Summoned. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 OCG Errors people(FYI OCG= Original Card Grammar)[spoiler=Brie the Rouge OCG Correction]This card cannot be destroyed while it is in Defense Position. [try and add to it's effect] [spoiler=Leader James' OCG Correction]This card gains 100 ATK for each Warrior-type monster on the field. Too much stars and way too much attack. Try lowering ATK to 2800 and the stars to 8 or 7 and the effect would be balanced.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
recono17 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 TY all of u guys and most a big thanks to SHadowBox for telling me whats wrong and how to fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 TY all of u guys and most a big thanks to SHadowBox for telling me whats wrong and how to fix it NP :D plus... you're new that means.... REP +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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