Yang Xiao-Long Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 After a few hours of trying to get things working, I made my first holo! Since it's a Ritual monster, I'm adding its Ritual Spell as well (which is not holo). [align=center] Lore:[/align][align=center]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Call to War". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent must show their hand during their Standby Phase. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. By paying 1000 Life Points, you can send 2 cards from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 2 monsters on your opponent's field. Lore:[/align]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Masashi Masaki - Swordswoman of Minoru". You must also offer monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 10 or more. Please rate and/or comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven_PSN-14 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 9/10 because this is my first post and I'm not expert rating cards. :P Looks cool, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COLS Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 transparency? unheard of. Like the effect and cant be bothered finding OCG errors. BUT the holo is a bit too strong, and i know this is your first and it gets some taking used to, so might want to dial up the transparency. 9/10 coz i like you and you're new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 first effect reminds me of the card Mind on Air definately more powerful than standard rituals, good to see they get some respect too 8.7/10 since you're new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 not that bad! 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Card's are good enough. No corrections for OCG.8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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