Brittle Ice Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 A card I made for Monkey's contest. It's supposed to destroy FIRE monsters or make them useless against mine.Also, I hope you'll understand the whole fire-oxygen concept.=)Rate and comment, please. [spoiler=The Card] [spoiler=The Lore]This card can only be activated by paying 1000 Life Points. As long as this card remains face-up, any damage either player takes, except Battle Damage, is 0. In addition, each time a FIRE monster is Summoned, put 1 Oxygen Counter on this card (max. 4). For each Oxygen Counter on this card, face-up FIRE monsters lose 250 ATK. When there are 4 Oxygen Counters on this card, you can send it to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Oxygeddon" from your hand or Deck. This card can only be activated by paying 1000 Life Points. As long as this card remains face-up, any damage either player takes, except Battle Damage, is 0. In addition, each time a FIRE monster is Summoned, put 1 Oxygen Counter on this card (max. 4). For each Oxygen Counter on this card, face-up FIRE monsters lose 250 ATK. When there are 4 Oxygen Counters on this card, you can send it to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Oxygeddon" from your hand or Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Why are you paying 1000 Life Points? Some errors but I dont know how to word it so I can;t fix it for you. Nice image. Maybe a tad OP'd but nothing to worry abut because its not that OP'd. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Well, you're paying 1000 points to activate the card.As for the OCG, I think that maybe the second sentence sounds fishy. Others should be fine.Thanks.=) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 It's not OPed :P great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Then if your paying 1000 Life Points to activate the card is should say so. This card can only be activated by paying 1000 Life Points. Or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Yep.I shall correct it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 I'm helping you get scored better in his contest. =)Can't wait to see more of your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Thanks. Wero-vasto, thank you, as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 the 1000 LP pay makes it balanced out more FIRE decks aren't too common, so it's a great use against them 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Well, FIRE monsters include Volcanics who can deal a lot of Direct Damage. Another thing is that FIRE monsters have a lot of attack points.So, this card kinda deals with both problems. Anyway, thanks, Ragnarok.=) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefire1179 Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Can't really add much can I? It's balanced and really achieves the desired goal, to weaken FIRE monsters. You know what would work really well with this card? A combustion type card that causes direct damage when oxygen counters are accumulated (just as a thought). Anyway, card rated 9/10. really cool. kick ass in the contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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