Waxing-Pathetic Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 I have not made a card in 9 months, any constructive criticism would be great! Errors fixed thanks to Saikano! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Berserker- Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 The effect seems balanced, but boring. You don't need the part that says "This card cannot be normal summoned or set". Ritual monsters cannot be normal summoned anyways. You should remove that part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waxing-Pathetic Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 O okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Weasel_46 Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Sweet cards 7.5/10 Minor ocg errors: spell ocg: "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Yumeria". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 6 or more from the field or your hand." monster ocg: "This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Spellbook No. 21".I'm not sure about the next part because I can't really tell how you meant to increase the ATK (only by 100, 100 for each spellcaster in play, or for each one on your field.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waxing-Pathetic Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Okay, thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.