Epoch - Shining White Knight

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I just wanted to post this individually to see if it does well. If so, I'm quitting the high levels to do about twenty or so level 4 and lower monsters before going back up. Please rate if you look. :P

 

[spoiler= Lore]1 Tuner + "Epoch - Shining Assailant"

When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 Level 5 or lower DARK monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can place 1 Shine Counter (max.3) on this card. Remove 3 Shine Counters on this card to send the top 3 cards of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total Level of any monsters sent to the Graveyard by this effect x200.

 

 

Shining Assailant (As requested)

 

(( This card's second effect does nothing on this card, eh? It's going to be used in other Synchro monsters with different Attributes, though.))

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

FIX:

1 Tuner + "Epoch - Shining Assailant"

When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 Level 5 or lower DARK monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can place 1 Shine Counter (max.3) on this card. Remove 3 Shine Counters on this card to send the top 3 cards of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total Level of any monsters sent to the Graveyard by this effect x200.

 

small errors, just capitalisation errors and miswording.

can you post the other card mentioned in the Synchro? just to make a comparison.

 

effect is ok, might not last turns though. DEF is a bit high for the level though

maybe cut to 2000 or so because it's already quite hefty in the ATK department.

7.5/10

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Thanks! I shall alter the card to the stated fixes.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

only one fix for the second card is needed.

 

just put a capital "M" for monster.

Synchro Material Monster.

and thats it.

it's effect is a little bland however..... ok-ish...useful if you run Lights so you can abuse Honest or something.