Lol Pyro/Machine Hybrid

[Guest Zeonark]

[align=center]Did it for teh lulz.

 

[spoiler=Lore]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Pyro OR Machine-Type monsters you control. This monster is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn, you can remove a monster in your Graveyard from play to inflict damage equal to half of the discarded monster's ATK to your opponent's Life Points. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to double this monster's original ATK untill the End Phase. This monster is destroyed during the End Phase it's ATK is higher than 7000.

 

 

NOW I'M SURE I DID THE HIGH ATK MACHINE-TYPE PART RIGHT.

 

Ohohohoho. 200 DEF. The abuse with this card...

...Lol. It's probably OP'd. So I'll probably increase the Summoning Conditions if you all agree.

 

Image Credit = HP Doom. (Next time, I will comment for sure buddy.)

 

Rate/Hate/Be a hybrid. Whatever.

 

...I might start doing Hybrids instead of Meta and Anti-Meta support. 8D[/align]

[Ririkun]

I really like the picture of the card and it's stats are balanced, lol at 200 DEF.

 

Though I have to say, this card seems very underpowered. Getting 3 tributes out

and them having to be PYRO or MACHINE seems like a very big cost, I'd rather get

Obelisk the Tormentor instead. And the effect's seem mediocre and don't actually

do much. The last effect is even wierder since it'll be hard to get 2 tributes in

because you already needed 3 just to bring it out, and top of that, it dies right after...o,o

 

Imagine tributing 3 monsters to get this guy out, then tributing 2 more to increase it's

ATK. Opponent activates book of moon. Hah, okay that probably won't happen, but still ;)

I'd like to see this have better effects, or at least a easier summoning requirement.

[Guest Zeonark]

I really like the picture of the card and it's stats are balanced' date=' lol at 200 DEF.

 

Though I have to say, this card seems very underpowered. Getting 3 tributes out

and them having to be PYRO or MACHINE seems like a very big cost, I'd rather get

Obelisk the Tormentor instead. And the effect's seem mediocre and don't actually

do much. The last effect is even wierder since it'll be hard to get 2 tributes in

because you already needed 3 just to bring it out.

 

Imagine tributing 3 monsters to get this guy out, then tributing 2 more to increase it's

ATK. Opponent activates book of moon. o,o Hah, okay that probably won't happen, but still ;)

I'd like to see this have better effects, or at least a easier summoning requirement.

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I meant Pyro AND Machine. But I dunno how to word it to that. Help?

I could drop the tributes for double ATK to 1. But then it would be lulzy with swarming. Because it isn't Once Per Turn.

 

LolBookOfMoon. I could drop the direct damage effect to full ATK damage and tribute 1 monster. Would it be enough then?

[Ririkun]

I really like the picture of the card and it's stats are balanced' date=' lol at 200 DEF.

 

Though I have to say, this card seems very underpowered. Getting 3 tributes out

and them having to be PYRO or MACHINE seems like a very big cost, I'd rather get

Obelisk the Tormentor instead. And the effect's seem mediocre and don't actually

do much. The last effect is even wierder since it'll be hard to get 2 tributes in

because you already needed 3 just to bring it out.

 

Imagine tributing 3 monsters to get this guy out, then tributing 2 more to increase it's

ATK. Opponent activates book of moon. o,o Hah, okay that probably won't happen, but still ;)

I'd like to see this have better effects, or at least a easier summoning requirement.

[/quote']

 

I meant Pyro AND Machine. But I dunno how to word it to that. Help?

I could drop the tributes for double ATK to 1. But then it would be lulzy with swarming. Because it isn't Once Per Turn.

 

LolBookOfMoon. I could drop the direct damage effect to full ATK damage and tribute 1 monster. Would it be enough then?

 

Hah, well this is what I think.

 

Direct damage effect is fine, if you want, you could change its requirement by instead removing from play a PYRO or MACHINE from your graveyard and then they lose life points equal to half of its atk, so you dont lose hand advantage.

 

I think the tribute cost should be 2, either PYRO or MACHINE tributes. since 1 seems a bit too good. And I think the last two parts are unnecessary, the one where you tribute 2 monsters to increase its atk and then it kills itself seems weird.

[Guest Zeonark]

I really like the picture of the card and it's stats are balanced' date=' lol at 200 DEF.

 

Though I have to say, this card seems very underpowered. Getting 3 tributes out

and them having to be PYRO or MACHINE seems like a very big cost, I'd rather get

Obelisk the Tormentor instead. And the effect's seem mediocre and don't actually

do much. The last effect is even wierder since it'll be hard to get 2 tributes in

because you already needed 3 just to bring it out.

 

Imagine tributing 3 monsters to get this guy out, then tributing 2 more to increase it's

ATK. Opponent activates book of moon. o,o Hah, okay that probably won't happen, but still ;)

I'd like to see this have better effects, or at least a easier summoning requirement.

[/quote']

 

I meant Pyro AND Machine. But I dunno how to word it to that. Help?

I could drop the tributes for double ATK to 1. But then it would be lulzy with swarming. Because it isn't Once Per Turn.

 

LolBookOfMoon. I could drop the direct damage effect to full ATK damage and tribute 1 monster. Would it be enough then?

 

Hah, well this is what I think.

 

Direct damage effect is fine, if you want, you could change its requirement by instead removing from play a PYRO or MACHINE from your graveyard and then they lose life points equal to half of its atk, so you dont lose hand advantage.

 

I think the tribute cost should be 2, either PYRO or MACHINE tributes. since 1 seems a bit too good. And I think the last two parts are unnecessary, the one where you tribute 2 monsters to increase its atk and then it kills itself seems weird.

 

Alrighty. I'll change the direct damage to that.

 

Fixed to 2. The last two parts are there to keep it's Machine-Type part. Since Machine-Types have a habit of having ATK doubled. Changed it. Now you can tribute 1 to double it's ATK and if you do it again, it'll kill itself. Reasonable since you'll get a 9000 ATK monster right?

 

This looks hilarious for a Level 9 monster.

[Ririkun]

I really like the picture of the card and it's stats are balanced' date=' lol at 200 DEF.

 

Though I have to say, this card seems very underpowered. Getting 3 tributes out

and them having to be PYRO or MACHINE seems like a very big cost, I'd rather get

Obelisk the Tormentor instead. And the effect's seem mediocre and don't actually

do much. The last effect is even wierder since it'll be hard to get 2 tributes in

because you already needed 3 just to bring it out.

 

Imagine tributing 3 monsters to get this guy out, then tributing 2 more to increase it's

ATK. Opponent activates book of moon. o,o Hah, okay that probably won't happen, but still ;)

I'd like to see this have better effects, or at least a easier summoning requirement.

[/quote']

 

I meant Pyro AND Machine. But I dunno how to word it to that. Help?

I could drop the tributes for double ATK to 1. But then it would be lulzy with swarming. Because it isn't Once Per Turn.

 

LolBookOfMoon. I could drop the direct damage effect to full ATK damage and tribute 1 monster. Would it be enough then?

 

Hah, well this is what I think.

 

Direct damage effect is fine, if you want, you could change its requirement by instead removing from play a PYRO or MACHINE from your graveyard and then they lose life points equal to half of its atk, so you dont lose hand advantage.

 

I think the tribute cost should be 2, either PYRO or MACHINE tributes. since 1 seems a bit too good. And I think the last two parts are unnecessary, the one where you tribute 2 monsters to increase its atk and then it kills itself seems weird.

 

Alrighty. I'll change the direct damage to that.

 

Fixed to 2. The last two parts are there to keep it's Machine-Type part. Since Machine-Types have a habit of having ATK doubled. Changed it. Now you can tribute 1 to double it's ATK and if you do it again, it'll kill itself. Reasonable since you'll get a 9000 ATK monster right?

 

This looks hilarious for a Level 9 monster.

 

haha I didn't even notice this was 9 stars. You should make it 8 stars

since its only 2 tributes and most monsters with those kind of stats are 8

stars. Also, it works with a card called Trade in, which lets you draw 2 cards by discarding a 8 star monster.

 

The effect is a lot nicer now, the OCG is great, I don't see any mistakes.

I like the double atk thing now since it's easier to get, but the thing where it gets destroyed if it exceeds 7000 is still unnecessary. You shouldn't let it's effect stack so It get's 12,000 ATK the second time you use it! 6000 atk is enough, and you should re-word it so its effect works Once per turn.

[Rehva]

GTFO jk!

 

Looks Nice. Doesnt Seem op'ed to me. 200 DEF :]

 

Nice pic also. 9/10

[Guest Zeonark]

I really like the picture of the card and it's stats are balanced' date=' lol at 200 DEF.

 

Though I have to say, this card seems very underpowered. Getting 3 tributes out

and them having to be PYRO or MACHINE seems like a very big cost, I'd rather get

Obelisk the Tormentor instead. And the effect's seem mediocre and don't actually

do much. The last effect is even wierder since it'll be hard to get 2 tributes in

because you already needed 3 just to bring it out.

 

Imagine tributing 3 monsters to get this guy out, then tributing 2 more to increase it's

ATK. Opponent activates book of moon. o,o Hah, okay that probably won't happen, but still ;)

I'd like to see this have better effects, or at least a easier summoning requirement.

[/quote']

 

I meant Pyro AND Machine. But I dunno how to word it to that. Help?

I could drop the tributes for double ATK to 1. But then it would be lulzy with swarming. Because it isn't Once Per Turn.

 

LolBookOfMoon. I could drop the direct damage effect to full ATK damage and tribute 1 monster. Would it be enough then?

 

Hah, well this is what I think.

 

Direct damage effect is fine, if you want, you could change its requirement by instead removing from play a PYRO or MACHINE from your graveyard and then they lose life points equal to half of its atk, so you dont lose hand advantage.

 

I think the tribute cost should be 2, either PYRO or MACHINE tributes. since 1 seems a bit too good. And I think the last two parts are unnecessary, the one where you tribute 2 monsters to increase its atk and then it kills itself seems weird.

 

Alrighty. I'll change the direct damage to that.

 

Fixed to 2. The last two parts are there to keep it's Machine-Type part. Since Machine-Types have a habit of having ATK doubled. Changed it. Now you can tribute 1 to double it's ATK and if you do it again, it'll kill itself. Reasonable since you'll get a 9000 ATK monster right?

 

This looks hilarious for a Level 9 monster.

 

haha I didn't even notice this was 9 stars. You should make it 8 stars

since its only 2 tributes and most monsters with those kind of stats are 8

stars. Also, it works with a card called Trade in, which lets you draw 2 cards by discarding a 8 star monster.

 

The effect is a lot nicer now, the OCG is great, I don't see any mistakes.

I like the double atk thing now since it's easier to get, but the thing where it gets destroyed if it exceeds 7000 is still unnecessary. You shouldn't let it's effect stack so It get's 12,000 ATK the second time you use it! 6000 atk is enough, and you should re-word it so its effect works Once per turn.

 

B-But, ridiculous ATK over 6000 is fun! D: CED + Power Bond + Limiter Removal proves it! ;~;

...Lol. Alright. I'll drop it to once per turn. Or I could change it to doubling the Original ATK. 3000 > 6000 > 9000 > 12000. I could up the level and remove the monsters from play if I wanted to do that. Would that work? o:

 

Once per turn was meant to be left out. For lulzy swarming.

I'll fix it.

 

GTFO jk!

 

Looks Nice. Doesnt Seem op'ed to me. 200 DEF :]

 

Nice pic also. 9/10

 

Thanks Raze. Glad to see you rating my stuff 8D

...Again. *Shot* Lol.

[Ririkun]

Well if you want it like that, sure. :) It'll be hard to tribute more than 1 monster, let alone tribute even 1 monster, haha,

A monster like this usually doesn't last long due to: Enemy Controller, Book of Moon, Fissure, Smashing Ground, Mirror Force, but I guess it works as a 1-hit wonder, you could maybe pull an OTK off with this. Anyway card looks good, don't think you need any more changes, Hope I helped you enough.

[Guest Zeonark]

Thanks alot for the help. I would rep ya, but I gave out too many today. xD With this, you better get swarming as fast as possible and tribute them all, otherwise, this card is quite...droppable.

 

Funny thing is, now that you've said that, I can imagine this going meta if it was real. Summon This > Swarm > Lightning Vortex > Tribute > Instant LOL.

 

Once again. Thank you. <3

[Ririkun]

Thanks alot for the help. I would rep ya' date=' but I gave out too many today. xD With this, you better get swarming as fast as possible and tribute them all, otherwise, this card is quite...droppable.

 

Funny thing is, now that you've said that, I can imagine this going meta if it was real. Summon This > Swarm > Lightning Vortex > Tribute > Instant LOL.

 

Once again. Thank you. <3

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no prob ;) Hah actually, this card is not meant for swarming, since you need

2 tributes to get this out. It's meant to destroy your opponent with a 6000 ATK+ crazy monster when their field is open. Heavy storm partners well with this card too.

[Guest Zeonark]

Thanks alot for the help. I would rep ya' date=' but I gave out too many today. xD With this, you better get swarming as fast as possible and tribute them all, otherwise, this card is quite...droppable.

 

Funny thing is, now that you've said that, I can imagine this going meta if it was real. Summon This > Swarm > Lightning Vortex > Tribute > Instant LOL.

 

Once again. Thank you. <3

[/quote']

 

no prob ;) Hah actually, this card is not meant for swarming, since you need

2 tributes to get this out. It's meant to destroy your opponent with a 6000 ATK+ crazy monster when their field is open. Heavy storm partners well with this card too.

 

Actually I mean start swarming after it's summoned. It itself isn't meant for swarming. xD

Forgot Heavy Storm. Lol.

 

Anyone else? I'm feeling a bit proud with this one.

[MarshyK-XS]

Damn you keep getting better dont you ;)

 

good card okay pic brilliant effect

 

9.8 / 10

[-DOOM]

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Pyro or 2 Machine-Type monsters you control. This monster is also treated as Machine-Type monster. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the half ATK of the removed monster. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to double this monster's original ATK until the End Phase. This monster is destroyed during the End Phase it's ATK is higher than 7000.

 

lol this is just OP. It's ATK gain effect is just to strong. I would recommend you to change this so that it's ATk can't get any higher than 6000 ( this is almost too high IMO).

 

Overall, ok card, some oCG errors and OP. Name fits, i like the abusabilty with Flamvell commando, so 8,5/10

[Guest Zeonark]

Damn you keep getting better dont you ;)

 

good card okay pic brilliant effect

 

9.8 / 10

 

Nah. I'm getting worse at this.

 

Thanks.

 

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Pyro or 2 Machine-Type monsters you control. This monster is also treated as Machine-Type monster. Once per turn' date=' you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the half ATK of the removed monster. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to double this monster's original ATK until the End Phase. This monster is destroyed during the End Phase it's ATK is higher than 7000.

 

lol this is just OP. It's ATK gain effect is just to strong. I would recommend you to change this so that it's ATk can't get any higher than 6000 ( this is almost too high IMO).

 

Overall, ok card, some oCG errors and OP. Name fits, i like the abusabilty with Flamvell commando, so 8,5/10

[/quote']

 

Inorite? But it's ATK gain is meant for a One Hit resort, and if you don't make it, he's canned at the End Phase. Plus, dropping this at 6000 would destroy the purpose of a OTK lulz own! D:

Most I'll do is increase the summoning conditions. Would that work?

 

I KNEW it was gonna be a awesome name!

Thanks HP. <3

[Maliki]

I think this is the best I have seen from you ;)

 

9/10

[Guest Zeonark]

I think this is the best I have seen from you ;)

 

9/10

 

Seriously?

 

Good god. I can't be this good. I could've sworn I was terrible. D:

 

Thanks US.

[-DOOM]

Damn you keep getting better dont you ;)

 

good card okay pic brilliant effect

 

9.8 / 10

 

Nah. I'm getting worse at this.

 

Thanks.

 

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Pyro or 2 Machine-Type monsters you control. This monster is also treated as Machine-Type monster. Once per turn' date=' you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the half ATK of the removed monster. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to double this monster's original ATK until the End Phase. This monster is destroyed during the End Phase it's ATK is higher than 7000.

 

lol this is just OP. It's ATK gain effect is just to strong. I would recommend you to change this so that it's ATk can't get any higher than 6000 ( this is almost too high IMO).

 

Overall, ok card, some oCG errors and OP. Name fits, i like the abusabilty with Flamvell commando, so 8,5/10

[/quote']

 

Inorite? But it's ATK gain is meant for a One Hit resort, and if you don't make it, he's canned at the End Phase. Plus, dropping this at 6000 would destroy the purpose of a OTK lulz own! D:

Most I'll do is increase the summoning conditions. Would that work?

 

I KNEW it was gonna be a awesome name!

Thanks HP. <3

 

or make the cost for doubling the ATK bigger. Maybe 2 monsters or 1 monster and 1 spell or trap card

[Guest Zeonark]

Damn you keep getting better dont you ;)

 

good card okay pic brilliant effect

 

9.8 / 10

 

Nah. I'm getting worse at this.

 

Thanks.

 

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Pyro or 2 Machine-Type monsters you control. This monster is also treated as Machine-Type monster. Once per turn' date=' you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the half ATK of the removed monster. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to double this monster's original ATK until the End Phase. This monster is destroyed during the End Phase it's ATK is higher than 7000.

 

lol this is just OP. It's ATK gain effect is just to strong. I would recommend you to change this so that it's ATk can't get any higher than 6000 ( this is almost too high IMO).

 

Overall, ok card, some oCG errors and OP. Name fits, i like the abusabilty with Flamvell commando, so 8,5/10

[/quote']

 

Inorite? But it's ATK gain is meant for a One Hit resort, and if you don't make it, he's canned at the End Phase. Plus, dropping this at 6000 would destroy the purpose of a OTK lulz own! D:

Most I'll do is increase the summoning conditions. Would that work?

 

I KNEW it was gonna be a awesome name!

Thanks HP. <3

 

or make the cost for doubling the ATK bigger. Maybe 2 monsters or 1 monster and 1 spell or trap card

 

Well after the first double I could add that. 1 Monster + 1 Spell/Trap. But I dunno how to word that. D:

[-DOOM]

"you can send 1 monster card and 1 Spell or Trap Card you control to the Graveyard, to....."

 

i hope this is right

[ragnarok1945]

nice burn effect, it seems to be fine since it's only half the atk anyway

 

though doubling this card's atk is too much

 

I'd just raise its atk by 1000 and that's enough

 

8.6/10