NeoMordiki Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 As my last post was locked I have opened a new one with the assumption that I can't make realistic like cards with anything to do with Dark Synchro Monsters. Please post your thoughts other than just an arbitrary number. Scythe of Betrayal:Continuous TrapGain control of one of your opponent's monsters. It is treated as a normal monster and loses all it's abilities. The target monster gains 1000 ATK. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the monster. When the monster is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard this card's controller loses 500 Life points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Dark Synchros go in the Any Other Cards section that were you can freely post Dark Snchros as for this card I give it an 7/10 it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 ok. is there anything you would have changed about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Alright i suppose 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 thank you. but what would you have done to change it? sorry numbers are all fine and good but I would want to know what makes people think such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 ok. is there anything you would have changed about it?Nope your good nice OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Ok I'm actually new to the term. Original Card Graphic? If so I just browse deviant art. sometimes art inspires the cards I make too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Official Card Grammer it means the text is what you would find on a real card or something very similar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Oh ok. Good to know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Yep no problem. Nice card though you gonna make more like this? It's not much of a thread when there's only 1 card on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Of course. I will have to make these as I go until I found the notes I wrote on paper when I was bored back in high school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 pretty good ocg could need a little tweeking though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 pretty good ocg could need a little tweeking thoughSure thing what needs work? I spent a whole ten minutes on this card design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 OK.... first card: OVERPOWERED. This is "Brain Control" + 1000 ATK points. That alone is overpowered (seeing as "Brain Control" is limited and costs you MORE than 500 ATK). second: Useless. You've got 3 TCG Fiend-Type Tuner monsters, and "Pandemonium" is a piece of junk (not searchable, and has to be a lvl 5, 1-tribute monster). That means "Dark Tinker" and "Dark Resonator", and "Dark Resonator" is the only one that would really cooperate because of his semi-splashability. That means using "Darkbishop" and "Desrook". You'll probably be keeping "Desrook" in your hand to get back "Terrorking" when he gets sent to the Graveyard... and "Darkbishop" is more useful by stopping your opponent's card effect. I really wouldn't -8 myself with this for a beatstick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 OK.... first card: OVERPOWERED. This is "Brain Control" + 1000 ATK points. That alone is overpowered (seeing as "Brain Control" is limited and costs you MORE than 500 ATK). second: Useless. You've got 3 TCG Fiend-Type Tuner monsters' date=' and "Pandemonium" is a piece of junk (not searchable, and has to be a lvl 5, 1-tribute monster). That means "Dark Tinker" and "Dark Resonator", and "Dark Resonator" is the only one that would really cooperate because of his semi-splashability. That means using "Darkbishop" and "Desrook". You'll probably be keeping "Desrook" in your hand to get back "Terrorking" when he gets sent to the Graveyard... and "Darkbishop" is more useful by stopping your opponent's card effect. I really wouldn't -8 myself with this for a beatstick.[/quote'] Dude you are way to harsh. Give a little encouragement. NOT critisism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 OK.... first card: OVERPOWERED. This is "Brain Control" + 1000 ATK points. That alone is overpowered (seeing as "Brain Control" is limited and costs you MORE than 500 ATK). Actually, if it was JUST a Brain Control, as in for one turn, it wouldn't be so bad - since it negates the effect and all. But that effect is Continuous, making it worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Well the first one does negate the controlled monster's effect. I guess I forgot to type in that you'd have to pay 500 life points a turn. second one: I was going back and forth about giving it piercing damage or not. I didn't know how many fiend tuners there are. Not to mention the fact I actually like the two you mention I actually like using. Also there are ways to convert creature types so if you summon a tuner (let's say junk warrior) it becomes a fiend with DNA surgery. Lastly Axe of Despair would not only make this a 3700 ATK monster but also allow for it to attack twice.OK.... first card: OVERPOWERED. This is "Brain Control" + 1000 ATK points. That alone is overpowered (seeing as "Brain Control" is limited and costs you MORE than 500 ATK). Actually' date=' if it was JUST a Brain Control, as in for one turn, it wouldn't be so bad - since it negates the effect and all. But that effect is Continuous, making it worse.[/quote'] worse as in broken or worse as in not as powerful? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 dude its fine just change it and itll be alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Worse as in broken. You should have it deal a lot more damage when it hits the Graveyard, like 1500 or so. Or make it drop your hand. The 2nd card is actually pretty good, now that I think about how many cards are considered Archfiends. Summoned Skull, anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoMordiki Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 yep the archfiends are even more wide spread. Arch fiend Solider, Skull archfiend of lighting even a card possessed by Falling Down becomes an archfiend as well. As for the tuners there are ways around it ^^Ok revisted version: my original idea (after finding my notes) was that it was supposed to be like Gaurdian Dreadscythe. In the fact it was supposed to be powerful but still hurt you for using it as wellOk now I just solved the "no fiend tuner's problem as well" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Good cards, but I see a few OCG errors: Scythe of BetrayalGain control of one 1 of your opponent's monsters. That monster gains 1000 ATK, it is treated as a Normal Monster and loses all it's abilities its effect is negated. The target monster gains 1000 ATK. (this effect is already mentioned in the previous sentence) When this card is removed from the field, destroy the that monster. When the that monster is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, this card's controller loses 500 Life Points. Archfiend Captain1 Fiend-Type Tuner + 1 or more fiend Non-Tuners non-Tuner Fiend-Type monstersThis card can attack equal to the number of Archfiend cards in play as many times as the number of "Archfiend" cards on the field. During each of your Standby Phases, pay 800 Life Points or destroy this card. Smiling TricksterOnce per turn, you may can discard 1 card to declare 1 Type of monster. Until the end of your turn (this is correct but you could add here "Until your End Phase" as this is the phrase seen in the latest cards), this card becomes the Type you declared. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 even though it loses its effects, gaining control of it still makes it OPed you never said you can't use it for tribute or synchro summoning 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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