mobumak Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Please post the card's effect, then I'll be able to read it. :) Here's what I see so far. Pro: The name is awesome.Pro: The picture is awesome. Neutral: Change DIVINE to LIGHT or EARTH. Divine still isn't allowed here... >_>Neutral: Change Ultimate Warrior to Warrior, fake types aren't allowed in this section either. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mobumak Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 This card cannot be special summon except by paying half your life points and removing from play all Warrior-type monsters from your Deck and Graveyard. When this card is put in play, it's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Warrior-type monsters removed by this cards effect x300. By removing all the cards in your graveyard this card is unnafected by your opponent's card effect until the end of the battle phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Thanks for the effect. :) Here's your rate, and OCG fix. :)This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by paying half your life points and removing from play all Warrior-type monsters from your Deck and Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, it's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Warrior-type monsters removed by this card's effect x300. By removing all the cards in your Graveyard this card is unnafected by your opponent's card effects until the end of the Battle Phase. Phases are capitalizedspecial summon=Special Summongraveyard=Graveyard Wow... Pro: You made it ridiculously powerful, and you pretty much got away with it due to the immense cost. Con: The very last part makes this card slightly overpowered. How about changing it to this? Once per duel, you can remove from play all cards in your Graveyard to have this card be unaffected by opponent's card effects until the end of the Battle Phase. That makes its OTK possibility nullified slightly. Anyway, it seems like a good card. :D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 The last sentence isn't OPed at all...and neither is the card. It's fine the way it is except for the minor OCG errors. But that's not really important. This is rather good for a new member. I await more from you. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arctic_Circle34 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 No divine. This card seems to have suicide written all over it. You lose all Warriors from your deck and Grave and you lose a good sum of LP. And maybe for 1 turn it's invincible, but afterwards, it's vulnerable to anything and then you have none of your warriors left. Still good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamtaro Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 gamble card. amazing pic. effect seems oped in some ways. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Neutral: Change DIVINE to LIGHT or EARTH. Divine still isn't allowed here... >_> No, they're fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 [quote name=''~Wright~' pid='3637424' dateline='1263269540' Neutral: Change DIVINE to LIGHT or EARTH. Divine still isn't allowed here... >_>FAIL This card cannot be Special Summoned' date=' except by paying half your [b']Life Points[/b](OCG thread says capitalised) and removing from play all Warrior-type monsters from your Deck and Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, it's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Warrior-type monsters removed by this card's effect x300. By removing all the cards in your Graveyard from play this card is unnafected by your opponent's card effects until the end of the Battle Phase. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 OCG terrible 4/10 for trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HaloAndHorns Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Please post the card's effect' date=' then I'll be able to read it. :) Here's what I see so far. [b']Pro: [/b]The name is awesome.Pro: The picture is awesome. Neutral: Change DIVINE to LIGHT or EARTH. Divine still isn't allowed here... >_>Neutral: Change Ultimate Warrior to Warrior, fake types aren't allowed in this section either. :? I'm not sure about the Divine one but you can make fake types.. They just need to be realistic as in cards you make up and arnt like 9000ATK and 9000DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Fake types are not realistic, so they go in Other Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 [quote='~Wright~' pid='3637424' dateline='1263269540' Neutral: Change DIVINE to LIGHT or EARTH. Divine still isn't allowed here... >_>FAILUh' date=' no. :? Despite Obelisk being re-released, I don't see sufficient reason to allow Divine in Realistic. ... I think we'll keep things as they are and re-evaluate at a later date. Anyway, just make the changes and it'll be fine. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 next time write out the lore, it was hard to read the cost is great, so it should be OPed, though the last effect makes it TOO OPed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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