makelo Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Dark Light DragonEffect: Discarding 1 card from your hand, this monster can attack directly to your opponent's Life Points. When this monster is destroyed as result of battle with a monster of 1800 ATK or more, you can pay 200 LP to return this monster in the same position in was destroyed (Battle damage is applied normally). 5 - Headed Dark DragonEffect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set except by tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters under your control. During each turn, in the Standby Phasa you must discard 1 card from your hand. If you cannot discard any card, this monster is destroyed. Each turn, if you have at least 1 or more Dragon-Type monsters under your control, you can select between:· Select 1 opponent's monster. Descrease his ATK in 800 until the End Phase.· Select 1 monster under your control. That monster gains 800 ATK points until the End Phase. Dragon of the Dark WorldEffect: When this card is sucessfully summoned, each turn you can select 1 monster under your control. Tribute that monster to increase the ATK of this monster equal to the half of total ATK of the tributed monster. While this card remains face-up in ATK position, this monster cannot be destroyed in battle for a monster of 2000 ATK or more. Each turn, you must pay 400 Life Points. If you cannot be pay that LPs, this monster is destroyed. Silver Ligth DragonEffect: If your opponent controls 2 or more monsters with 1500 ATK or more, you can pay 500 LP to special summon this monster from your hand. When this monster is sucessfully special summoned, before your Battle Phase you can tribute 1 monster under your control to inflict the half part of the ATK of the monster tributed to the opponent's Life Points as damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SgtExell Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I'm gonna go through the cards one by one. I'm sorry ive written so much too but i like the cards so i'm improving them so you can make more with my suggestions. Dark Light Dragon I'm not great with modern OCG but I think it should be OCG FixEffect: This monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly by discarding 1 card from your hand. When this Monster Card is destroyed as result of battle by a monster with 1800 ATK or more, you can pay 200 LP to return this monster to its original position (Damage calculation is applied normally). I really like the image however the effect could do with some tweaking.You should make the card that has to be discarded like a level 4 or more monster as 1700 Attack on Life Points is pretty high. Also 200 Life Points is very little to put this life points attcking card on the filed but its a good idea. 5 - Headed Dark Dragon OCG FixEffect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters you control. Once per turn in your Standby Phase you must discard 1 card from your hand. If you cannot discard any card, this monster is destroyed. Each turn, if you have at least 1 or more Dragon-Type monsters under your control, you can select between:· Select 1 opponent's monster. Descrease his ATK in 800 until the End Phase.· Select 1 monster under your control. That monster gains 800 ATK points until the End Phase. The image is OK, the effect gives this card 3600 Attack and for an 8star monster thats quite high. Use this bullet point in effects because it looks better ● . :) Dragon of the Dark World OCG Fix Effect: When this card is sucessfully Summoned, once per turn turn you can select 1 monster you control. Tribute that monster to increase the ATK of this monster equal to the half of the total ATK of the Tribute monster. While this card remains face-up in ATK position, this Monster Card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle bya monster with 2000 ATK or more. Once per turn, you must pay 400 Life Points. If you cannot be pay that LPs, this monster is destroyed. I like the image and the effect ok so i'm glad you made it a six star monster or it would be OP. Silver Light Dragon OCG Fix Effect: If your opponent controls 2 or more monsters with an ATK of 1500 or more, you can pay 500 LP to Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this monster is sucessfully Special Summoned, before your Battle Phase you can Tribute 1 monster you control to inflict the half of the Tribute Monsters ATK as Battle Damage to your opponent's life points. Love the image, noticed a theme of paying Life points, tributing monsters and halfing attacks. Dont think im having a go, i really like the cards and am doing this for your benefit, dont make too many more dragons as everyone makes them but as you're relatively new i'll let you off. Hope you make some more cards. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imperial tech Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I decided to fix theOCG for you.Light Dark DragonEffect:By discarding 1 card from your hand, this monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this monster is destroyed as result of battle by a monster with 1800 ATK or more, you can pay 200 LP to return this monster to your side of the Field (Battle damage is applied normally). Five Headed Dark DragonEffect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters your control. During your Standby Phase you must discard 1 card from your hand. If you cannot discard any card, this monster is destroyed. Each turn, if you have at least 1 or more Dragon-Type monsters under your control (except this card), you can select between:· Select 1 opponent's monster. Descrease it's ATK in 800 until the End Phase.· Select 1 monster under your control. That monster gains 800 ATK points until the End Phase. Dark Dragon of the Dark WorldEffect: During the Turn card is sucessfully Normal Summoned, Special Summoned or Set, you can select 1 monster under your control. Tribute that monster to increase the ATK of this monster equal to the half of total ATK of the tributed monster until the End Phase of this Turn. While this card remains face-up in ATK position, this monster cannot be destroyed in battle for a monster of 2000 ATK or more. Light Silver DragonEffect: If your opponent controls 2 or more monsters with 1500 ATK or more, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this card is sucessfully Special Summoned, you can Tribute 1 monster under your control to inflict half of the monster's ATK as Damageto the opponent's Life Points. Awsome Pics.Some Major OCG Errors but still very balanced. Some were a bit Under Powered.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 custom image credit, one of them was leo 3.4 / 10 MK (WOOT WOOT 600 posts!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naturia Master Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 nice cards ocg fixed 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legacy117 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 B Rank Reason being:The card, Silver Light Dragon, is a bit overpowered. It is really easy to Special Summon it to the field and give alot of damage to your opponent in the process. Also, some of the cards have OCG errors. Take the OCG advice from the other posts and the cards should be better or great. Sorry if you take this harshly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 great idea, just need some help on your OCG, then you'll be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 the OCG has been fixed already in terms of effects, only Silver Light Dragon is OPed, make it hard to summon to the field 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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