raven123456 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arctic_Circle34 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 You're new. So I'll cut you some slack. But your card is very OP'd. It makes Brionac look fevil in comparison. Also remember to Caps your monsters name and type. Finally, probably make the name longer since there's already a Divine Knight in the TCG. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Ok for a newbie, so i'll give you credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Actually, Brionak is better. Since return-hand is better then destroy in some ways. But I think that this is still OP'ed. Perhaps make this less strong. But good for a newby. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Op'ed, nice pict anyway.. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamtaro Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 OPED 6/10 like everybody else lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 It's a Advanced-Warrior-Type version of Brionac. ...NO. D:< You can discard a number of cards from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy cards on your opponent's side of the field equal to the number of cards you discarded. Like everyone else said. Overpowered. Drop some ATK or make some summoning requirements. Although, I'd throw this into a Dark World/Fiend Roar Deity Deck for teh lulz. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Hah, put a requirement, like remove from play 4 light monsters from your graveyard? You could make it a different attribute, like EARTH so it gets its support. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Name needs Caps in the beginning.Pic is ok. (If you need any pics check these sites. Deviantart.com or Art CatacombsCard is OP, may need to add restrictions.OCG is ok, for a newbie.A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 OPed effect plus it's too short of an effect anyway. You need to make the cards specific for discarding, as well as add a drawback 7/10 since you're new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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