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What do you think of my cards?


supersonic4ever

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Ooc: Your sig is really big... could you put the picture into a spoiler?

[spoiler=insert optional title here]insert text here[/spoiler]

 

Anyway, back to your cards. For the cards, post the effect below the card in a spoiler.

 

I'll rate the shadow, I don't understand the second card.

 

Pro: Very creative

 

Con: OCG or, official card grammar, needs a bit of work. This is what the effect should look like:

 

When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster your opponent controls. This card's ATK and DEF become the ATK and DEF of the selected monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally.) If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it during the End Phase.

 

Con: It's a bit overpowered. Try making these changes:

 

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (damage calculation is applied normally)

When this card is selected as an attack target, you can Tribute 1 monster to negate the attack.

 

This makes it more balanced.

 

Con: The picture could be better. To find good pictures, go to the showcase section on this site, and go to Wanderley's card images, and the other archives. I'm sure you'll like the images that you find there. :)

 

Overall, 8/10

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