jamora Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 [spoiler=vanilla/tuner] [spoiler=Effect] [spoiler=synchro] [spoiler=plague zombie LV 1-12] [spoiler=magic] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menace13 Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 You really aren't that good at making cards. Try to learn the OCG. Not to mention English. But anyways, the Plague Zombies are OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 What is this I dun even... [spoiler=[b]Mega Review[/b]]Vanillas and Tuners: Your effect monster doesn't have an effect. D: Fix up the grammar on your lores, because if you are going to be making Vanillas, at least give them good lore... Effect Monsters: Darera: You have to have WATER monsters to gain ATK? Seems wildly random to me...this card is a zombie. Change the type to DARK or something. Juvenile: You don't equip Counters...and the whole part of the effect about clearing the Counters seems again, wildly far-fetched. Wolf: What do you mean by "played"? And if you had 8000 LP when you SS'd this card...it would gain 4000 ATK. (!) Cerberus: Your Mole > This card. Reindeer: You're only allowed three copies (at most, and on occasion) of ANY card, not just "Reindeer". Leviathan: So you give your opponent a free Tuner? Sweet. Giga: Considering the swarming capabilities of many Zombies, this card is OP'd. And why Dragons and Winged Beasts? Since all your LV1-10 monsters have the same effect: Basically, after your Battle Phase you can just summon the more powerful LV version of these cards? Even if you skipped your Battle Phase? LV 10: OP'd. LV 12: Overpowered. That's all there is to it. Magic Spell Cards: Return: Free Tuners? Hooray. Warfare: See "Zombie World". Overall, you could do better. Make sure to proofread your cards before you post them. Also, you could fix up that Official Card Grammar of yours with this thread. You can do better! ;) 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 hmm not too bad, though it could use a little more work5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 awesome thanks for that thread i have been looking 4 a thread like that i no that i have really bad ocg and well i could not fix it cause there where no threads on it but yea they will get fixed thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 you need more than 2 spell cards to support your vanillas the OCG is bad too, use the OCG thread to help you on that your synchro needs another effect, the other effect monsters' short effects are ok since they're low leveled 4.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 amazing pics, bad ocg though. where did you find the pics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 all around like look at a lot of threads to keep my ideas on cards good but yea um try deivent art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 how can a vanilla be a tuner? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 There are Vanilla Tuners. (See "Flamvell Guard") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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