Blackrose Dragon Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 I added a new "Ancient Gear" that it looks a bit "insecty"... Comment and rate pls! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Name structure is wrong, but whatever. Only supports its Archetype... 1000 Life Points. The un-negatable guy is teh smex. 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackrose Dragon Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 You're right about the effect: I prepared exactly a supportive lvl 6 monster, if you think that the strongest is chimera gadjiltron-ancient gear, with 2300 ATK! Actually the lvl 6 monster like Beast-ancient gear and engeneer-ancient gear have really low attack (2000-1500). this giant insect gives a little injection... :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 FIX: When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon up to 2 "Ancient Gear" monsters from your Deck or Graveyard. You can Tribute an "Ancient Gear" monster you control to increase this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. Quite good. very op'ed though. broken combo is Tribute summon this. SS 2 Gadjitron Dragons. Swing for game. broken.i would limit the monsters it can summon to say level 5 or lower....just to reduce its op'dness. very good card though. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 good card, maybe you can change the name to "Ancient Gear Deadly Spider" or someone else:) try to reduce the special summoned to level 5 or less, becuase for only 1000 LP you can special summon 2 AG Gadjitron Dragons and that its very Oped. great pic, where do you find it:) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackrose Dragon Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 good card' date=' maybe you can change the name to "Ancient Gear Deadly Spider" or someone else:) try to reduce the special summoned to level 5 or less, becuase for only 1000 LP you can special summon 2 AG Gadjitron Dragons and that its very Oped. great pic, where do you find it:) 9/10[/quote'] You right about the name! about the effect mate but you didn't get it: for "Ancient Gear", I mean really "Ancient Gear" the basic monster with 100 ATK/800 DEF lvl2. I didn't write, "Ancient gear" monsters ;D It's a bit more balanced than it seems! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 O_o sorry, i forgot that monsters XD. sorry for that:) its balanced now:) my error good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer of Apocalypse Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Pretty good OCG.........A little bit OP'ed 6/10? BoA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 now that makes sense. i thought you just forgot a word.its fine then, no real problems. just use the fix i gave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackrose Dragon Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 now that makes sense. i thought you just forgot a word.its fine then' date=' no real problems. just use the fix i gave.[/quote'] Yes, thank you for the advice! I promise next time to put a picture of "zombie world"!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Name is a pure weirdness. What about just "Ancient Gear Insect"? Anyway... OCG is fine, you just forgot to add "You can" on the beggining of the 2nd sentence, seems weird without it. Seems balanced, and the effect is great and usefull. Nice pic, too. ;) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Pretty nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Sephiroth_The_Legend already pointed out the OCG errors personally I wouldn't allow you to special summon ANY level of AG monsters, since that could include the gadgitron ones, make them lv4 or lower 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackrose Dragon Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Sephiroth_The_Legend already pointed out the OCG errors personally I wouldn't allow you to special summon ANY level of AG monsters' date=' since that could include the gadgitron ones, make them lv4 or lower 7/10[/quote'] Indeed I didn't mean any level monster AG: i meant just "Ancient Gear", the basic level 2 monster with 100ATK/800DEF, one of the first monster of the set. Obviously not gadjiltron ag!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 i would main deck this if it could though...... imagine the possibilities.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 A little bit op'ed, but otherwise I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackrose Dragon Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Thank you all! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 minor OCG errors, i'm sure this is the best OCG on this card: When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon up to 2 "Ancient Gear"s from your Deck or Graveyard. You can Tribute 1 "Ancient Gear" monster you control to have this card gain 500 ATK until the end of the turn. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. you need to add the 's' of the plural out of the " " when you mean the level 2 ancient gear monster, if not it seems like you mean the ancient gear archtype. nice one, with ocg fix, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackrose Dragon Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 minor OCG errors' date=' i'm sure this is the best OCG on this card: When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon up to 2 "Ancient Gear"s from your Deck or Graveyard. You can Tribute 1 "Ancient Gear" monster you control to have this card gain 500 ATK until the end of the turn. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. you need to add the 's' of the plural out of the " " when you mean the level 2 ancient gear monster, if not it seems like you mean the ancient gear archtype. nice one, with ocg fix, 9/10.[/quote'] Thank you for the advice, i go change it immediately!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenerationX Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Change the name, PLEASE! It is horribly blackening an otherwise good card. 7,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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