Epic Inciser Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 [align=center]My first single, "Wight Lord - The Tormented Soul", got some pretty awesome comments, so I decided to make another single. His name is supposed to be Latin, although I might be off a bit. Well here he is: Centaur Compleo Equus [spoiler=Effect]This card takes up 2 Monster Card Zones. When this card attacks a monster in it's column, increase it's ATK by 500. Once per turn, you can pay 700 Life Points to have 1 face-up Defense-Position monster your opponent controls lose 500 DEF. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, decrease the ATK and DEF of the monster that destroyed it by 500. If I missed anything important, please tell me.Comment, Rate, and if there's any OCG errors, please fix'em for me. :)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 ok now that's a first, never seen a card to take up more than 1 monster zone before and the OCG looks very good, though the 1st two sentences do sound a little weird but nevertheless since it has a unique effect, I'll give this 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 It's pretty good. Different, which is nice. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epic Inciser Posted January 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosMuramasa Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 I really liked it. Very unique effects, and the other minor effects make it great too. It has a little bit of everything. On top of that, the name is amazing and the picture is amazing. 10 / 10 for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epic Inciser Posted January 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 I really liked it. Very unique effects' date=' and the other minor effects make it great too. It has a little bit of everything. On top of that, the name is amazing and the picture is amazing. 10 / 10 for you.[/quote'] Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 And there it goes... Interesting... Sounds good... new... original... inteligent... Just 1 question: The second effect (second sentece) means the 2 Zone it Occupied no? If so, the OCG it's perfect, but if not, the first sentences maybe need to be change. SO 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 This card takes up occupies 2 Monster Card Zones. When this card attacks a monster in it's column, increase it's this card's ATK by 500. Once per turn, you can pay 700 Life Points to have decrease the DEF of 1 face-up Defense-Position monster your opponent controls lose by 500 DEF. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, decrease the ATK and DEF of the monster that destroyed it by 500. Awesome effect, very original. Also, an original name and great pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Ocg seems a little shaky but amazing/ EPIC first card, well done9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 It's his second card, but still amazing, as stated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 oh, soz. But he's still a beginner with good potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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