Latin Warrior

[Lady_Killer]

This is my signature card. It is the first card ive put effort in to so plz comment and tell me how i can improve it.

 

[ChaosMuramasa]

Picture's pretty pixelated. Kinda makes my eyes hurt. Your OCG is practically fine, just a few errors here and there. The effect is pretty good, though since it has a method of increasing it's own ATK you should lower the base ATK to maybe 2500. Considering it is a Ritual Monster, I'm going to guess "Noble Knighthood" is it's Ritual Spell Card needed to summon it.

 

OCG Fix:

This card can only be Special Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Noble Knighthood". When this card is Summoned, destroy all cards on the field except this card. This card gains 100 ATK for each card destroyed by this effect. This card is unaffected by card effects. When this card is destroyed, remove it from play.

 

Change it's ATK for better balancing and give it a better clearer picture and you've got an ace card.

[cmc1234]

Well for ritual cards you need state its summoned with a Ritual Spell Card, and that its Ritual Summoned, not just summoned.

 

This is actually really stupid. Maybe retype the effect. This is what the effect means

 

When this card is summoned its destroyed along with all the other cards. And you increase this cards atk and def by 100 for each cards destroyed. But when its destroyed you remove it from play

 

Why add the ATK and DEF gain if it gets removed from play as soon as you summon it?

 

There is more holes in this card then Paris Hilton XD lol

 

3/10

[ragnarok1945]

blurry pictures

 

making it immune to ALL card effects makes the ritual OPed

 

I'd make it only immune to spells or traps

 

4/10

[jack781217]

Immunity to all card effects is definitely not a good idea, not to mention this card's ATK and ATK gain. (despite the fact that Ritual Monsters are relatively hard to summon)

[wero-vasto]

OPed, some OCG errors :/

 

well bad pics...

 

 

6/10