Guest Zeonark Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 [align=center]Tenkou mitsuru tokoro ni warewa ari...Yomi no mon hiraku tokoro ni nanji ari...Ideyo, kami no ikazuchi! Kore de owari desu!Indignation! [spoiler=Lore]This monster cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters you control. If you Tributed atleast 2 Thunder-Type monsters to Tribute Summon this monster, destroy all cards on the field except this one. This monster cannot be destroyed the turn it is summoned. Each time this monster inflicts 1000 or more battle damage to your opponent, Special Summon 1 "Indignant Token" (Thunder-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). During your Main Phase 1, you can Tribute a number of "Indignant Tokens" you control and destroy 1 card on the field equal to the number of "Indignant Tokens" Tributed. Most godly Thunder Monster I have made evar. It might be overpowered though. Anyway, you guys will see that I kept up the Thunder Tradition of destroy a card on the field. ;D This card is pretty strong though. 1000 or more damage each attack and that's one more card you can pwn on the field. In short:Tokens + LolIndigntion + Ridiculous conditions = This. Image Credit = Jazin's Archive Rate/Hate/Comment/INDIGNAYSHUN. Whatever.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 "If you Tributed 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this monster, destroy all cards on the field except this one" should be "If you Tributed 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this monster, destroy all other cards on the field" since the tokens have card destruction effect, you should put restructions on the tokens 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 "If you Tributed 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this monster' date=' destroy all cards on the field except this one" should be "If you Tributed 5 monsters to Tribute Summon this monster, destroy all other cards on the field" since the tokens have card destruction effect, you should put restructions on the tokens 8.2/10[/quote'] Actually, I think the first one is correct because it's similar to the nuke effect on JD. I dunno. I'll check. Should I put that the Tokens can't be tributed? They're already at 0/0 in stats. /: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 not bad.. makes Thunder Playable. but 5 monsters is to much to nuke the field.i'd rather run Batterymen and run Short Circuit. effect is ok other than, but nothing really different. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 not bad.. makes Thunder Playable. but 5 monsters is to much to nuke the field.i'd rather run Batterymen and run Short Circuit. effect is ok other than' date=' but nothing really different. 7/10[/quote'] Should I change that to 4?Of course. Batteries make everything look noobish. ;D Any suggestions to up the rating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 change it to 3.2 monsters to summon it, 3 to blow field. or alternatevly, 2 monsters to summon.then, you can Tribute 2 Thunder type to blow field. that would be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 change it to 3.2 monsters to summon it' date=' 3 to blow field. or alternatevly, 2 monsters to summon.then, you can Tribute 2 Thunder type to blow field. that would be good.[/quote'] If I drop it that much, then it's no point of this being a Level 11. /: I could change it to any kind of 3 monsters and if you tributed 2 Thunder-Types, you get to nuke the field. Would it work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 like Plasma? yeah that'd work. id make it level 8 though and drop its ATK to round 2500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 like Plasma? yeah that'd work. id make it level 8 though and drop its ATK to round 2500. NooooIf I do that, my idea is completely crushed ;~; I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 couple of errors, you need to put a space in between at and least.battle damage = Battle Damagelast sentence should look like you can Tribute any number of "Indignant" tokens you control to destroy cards on the field equal to the number of tokens you Tributed. ill raise to 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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