wero-vasto Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 [align=center]Well here's a card that I made for a contest... and I win :D Hope this card is good, the contest was to make a Spirit monster and I based my card in the "Kitsune" all it's effect are based on the legend of "Kitsunes" [spoiler=1st Idea] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster on the field. Each time this card destroyed a monster by battle, inflict 300 of damage to your opponent. When this card return to your hand, you can Special Summon up to 2 level 3 or lower monster(s) from your Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. This monster(s) cannot be destroyed by battle or by a card effect and they cannot be tributed under any condition except for the Summon of this card. When you had played 9 times this card in a duel, increase it's original ATK and DEF by 1000. [spoiler=Edited Card] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster on the field. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 300 of damage to your opponent. When this card return to your hand, you can Special Summon up to 2 level 3 or lower monster(s) from your Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. Monsters Summoned by this card's effect cannot be Tributed except for the Tribute Summon of this card and cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage calculation is applied normally.). Also, when they're send to the Graveyard, remove them from play instead. When you play this card for the ninth time, increase it's original ATK and DEF by 1000 permantly. A little explanation of the effects: • "When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster on the field." = The Kitsunes are Forest Guardian • "Each time this card destroyed a monster by battle, inflict 300 of damage to your opponent." = The Kitsunes use Blue Fire • "When this card return to your hand, you can Special Summon up to 2 level 3 or lower monster(s) from your Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." = The Kitsunes morph :D • "When you had played 9 times this card in a duel, increase it's original ATK and DEF by 1000." = The Kitsunes have level based on the number of tails they have and 9 is the Strongest one. Well Hope you like it! :D Enjoy it hate it... well you know comment it ;D [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 OCG Fix:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster on the field. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. When this card returns to your hand, you can Special Summon up to 2 level 3 or lower monster(s) from your Deck or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. Monsters Summoned by this card's effect cannot be Tributed except for the Tribute Summon of this card and cannot be removed from the field, except by this card's effect. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) When this card is Summoned for the tenth time, this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF (permanently). So overpowered. It returns from the field to your hand, you Special Summon a pair of monsters in Defense Position that cannot be removed from the field. You then tribute them to Summon this thing. When this card goes back, you Special Summon the same monsters to tribute again. You can do this for 10 turns, and then you gain ATK that rivals Lv. 10s.Every turn, you deal damage to your opponent, and then during your opponent's turn, you have an impregnable wall to defend yourself. This really is quite broken. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 well, I can remove the "destroy by effect" part ... other than that all represent a normal "Kitsune" and the monsters summoned are level 3 or lower, and unfortunally not everyone use them, only for tuners... a Deck around him could be OPed... but if not... this still normal :D Thanks for the comment! ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Max Darkness already pointed out the OCG errors the 1000 atk gain at the end makes it OPed, you shouldn't have made it permanent yes it's 10 times, but the problem is you had an effect to summon monsters that can't be sent off the field So unless they can't be used to tribute summon this monster again, it's OPed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 STOP! :P jaja I understand it ;D I change it! ;D come in a few minutes and I change a little the effect.Edited ! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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