Shinzuku Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 [align=center] Since I run these guys, I decided I'd make em' some support. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned. You can Special Summon this card from your hand while you control 2 or more Zombie monsters. You can Special Summon 1 Zombie from your Graveyard, it is destroyed during the End Phase. When this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it and destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Zombie-type monster with 500 DEF from your Deck to your hand. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spymoft Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 the first one should say something similar like: "Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-type monster from your Graveyard. That monster is destroyed at the End Phase of this turn." Not 100% sure but i know the once per turn should be added, as well as the "-type." as for the second. do you mean 500 DEF or less? or just 500 defense? So far these cards i give them a 7/10 for the fact that with zombies, these cards would be extremely evil. Zombie master? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosMuramasa Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 OCG Fix for the first one:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand while you control 2 or more Zombie-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard. Destroy it during the End Phase. OCG on the 2nd one is actually fine. That is, if you meant 500 DEF exactly as noted above. I like both of their effects. The 2nd one is like an upgraded Dark World monster and the 1st one is like an upgraded Mezuki. They're also balanced very well and the pictures are nice. Good job, 7.5 / 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 "You can Special Summon 1 Zombie from your Graveyard, it is destroyed during the End Phase." you mean 1 Zombie-Type monster the rest of the OCG looks fine, and the pics are good, so I'll give this 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 FIX for 1st This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while you control 2 or more Zombie-Type monsters. You can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard, it is destroyed during the End Phase. FIX for 2nd When this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it and destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Zombie-Type monster with 500 DEF from your Deck to your hand. not to bad. the first screams OTK machine.. i'd limit its effect to Once per turn, its broken otherwise. second is not that good tbh.... Goblin Zombie is better. 1st card. 7.5/10 2nd 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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