superspeck Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 card 1Played should be activated,ATK/DEF should be ATK and DEF,Elven in their names should be "Elven" in it's name, graveyard should be Graveyard. card 2special summon should be Ritual Summoned,you need to say "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by a Ritual Summon."the effect of Restoration should be the effect of "Restoration".life points should be Life Points.You forgot the period at the end. card 3Forgot the period at the end. with corrections, 9/10. You also want a backround for the pic on the second card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks for your advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I think I fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Minor capitalization errors. 9-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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