Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Hello my fellow YCM Members, I haven't been making cards lately because I didn't know what to do but then I saw multiple threads about supports that inspired me to make this thread. I now present to you: Credit Goes To: Unforgiven Soul, Wanderely, ShadowPlasmaNotes: Click on the Banner to View Cards +1 Rep if you enjoyed my presentation or just simply enjoyed my cards.The first Effect Monster name is Rinzo he looked so similar to Jinzo so I just removed the J and replaced it with an R. [spoiler=[b]Updates[/b]]Added 3 Cards in Graveyard Abomination EffectsAdded 1 Card in Spell CardsAdded 1 Card in Trap Cards _________________________________________________________ [spoiler= [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3365/490915847f7444dm3.jpg' alt='490915847f7444dm3.jpg'>][align=center] Effect: Once you have summoned this card you may look at your opponents hand. If there is atleast 1 Spell Card, 1 Trap Card, and 1 Monster Card in your opponents hand this card gains 1700 ATK and DEF. If this card has been destroyed you may destroy 1 card to Special Summon this card from the graveyard to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned. If your opponent declares an attack on this card you may switch it to Face-Up Defense Position if you pay 250 Life Points. If this card has been destroyed you may Special Summon this card from the graveyard to the field in Face-Down Defense Position. Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be summoned by tributing 2 Zombie-Type monsters. Once per turn you may pay 1000 Life Points to look at your opponents hand. For every Monster Card in your opponents hand this card gains 200 ATK. If this card has been destroyed you may Special Summon 2 "Graveyard Tokens" (Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 500/DEF 1400). Effect: If your opponent reveals a Trap Card you must Special Summon this card. Once this card is on the field negate all Trap Effects. Once you have used this Effect you cannot use it again in the duel. If this card has been destroyed you may Special Summon 1 Lv. 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your graveyard to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Effect: If your opponent declares an attack on this card while its in Face-Down position and sucessfuly destroys it you may Special Summon this card from the graveyard to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. If this card has been Special Summoned from the graveyard this card gains 300 ATK. Effect: This card cannot be destroyed as the result of Monster Effects. If your opponent declares a Monster Effect this card gains 200 ATK. If this card has been destroyed you may destroy 2 Face-Down cards on your side of the field to gain 1000 Life Points Effect: Flip: You may Special Summon a "Graveyard Abomination - Crazed Dragon" from your hand. If there is atleast 2 "Graveyard Abomination - Crazed Dragon" on the field you may place a Spell Counter (Max. 1) on this card. You can remove that Spell Counter to active this effect. If you use this card for a Tribute Summon this card counts as 2 tributes. Effect: This card can be Normal Summoned. If you Normal Summon this card then this cards ATK is decreased by 500 and you cannot use this effect. Once you have Special Summoned this card you may place 1 Spell Counter (max. 1) on this card. You may remove the Spell Counter to Special Summon 1 Lv. 6 or bellow monster from the Graveyard to the field. If this card has been destroyed you may Special Summon a "Graveyard Abomination" from your Graveyard to the field. Effect: Once per turn you may increase the ATK of this card by 200 and decrease this cards DEF by 200. If this card has 0 DEF you must destroy this monster and you lose 700 Life Points. If this card has been destroyed you may Special Summon it back to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Effect: If your opponent declares an attack on this monster while in Attack-Position you may automatically switch it into Defense-Position. If this card has been destroyed as the result of battle you may Special Summon it from the Graveyard to the field in Face-Up Defense-Position. [/align] [spoiler=] [spoiler=] [spoiler=][align=center] Once per turn you may choose an effect:- Pay 500 Life Points Special Summon a Lv. 4 or lower" Graveyard Abomination " monster from your Graveyard to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. - Pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Lv. 9 or lower "Graveyard Abomination" monster from your Graveyard to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Effect: You may pay 500 Life Points to look at a Face-Down card on your opponents side of the field and choose the suitable effect:- If the card was a Monster Card your opponent must destroy that card. Discard this card on your End Phase- If the card is a Spell Card your opponent must place it on the top of their deck. Discard this card on your End Phase- If the card is a Trap Card your opponent cannot use it for this turn. Discard this card on your End Phase. Effect: You must discard atleast 5 cards to use this effect. Your opponent must discard 7 cards to destroy this card. Once per duel you may use this effect. If there is a monster with "Skeletal" or "Skeleton" in its name then your opponent loses 100 Life Points for every turn a monster with "Skeletal" in its name is on the field. [/align] [spoiler=] [align=center] Effect: If you have atleast 2 "Graveyard Abomination" monsters in your graveyard, you may Special Summon the lowest leveled "Graveyard Abomination" monster back to the field in Face-Up Defense Position. Once you have done that all monsters that have been Special Summoned from the graveyard cannot switch to Attack Position and cannot use its effect for 3 turns. Effect: If your opponent destroys a "Graveyard Abomination" you may look at the top of your deck. If the card is a Zombie-Type monster you may Special Summon a Lv. 6 or lower "Graveyard Abomination" from your graveyard to the field in Face-Up Attack Position. Discard this card after a "Graveyard Abomination" has been Special Summoned from the graveyard. Effect: Once per turn you may pay 500 Life Points use this effect. This card can only be destroyed as the result of a Monster Effect. Your opponent cannot declare an attack with a Lv. 5 or higher monster. Effect: If your opponent declares an attack on a "Graveyard Abomination" your opponent must place the card he declared an attack with back to his hand and you may Special Summon 1 Lv. 4 or lower "Graveyard Abomination" monster. Discard this card on your End Phase. [/align] [spoiler=][align=center][/align][spoiler= Application List]Simply PM me this and the set must be an archetype set:Username:URL to your set:Reason(Optional): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I like the presentation. It's different than most others. About the cards...a couple OCG errors I see. Like "face-up" instead of "Face-Up" and "Graveyard" instead of "graveyard". But other than that...all I can see, but I'm not a OCG expert like some members are. The images are really nice and for some reason, they look like they fit the name. I don't see that a lot. Pretty good cards and set. I'll give it a 8/10. Fix the minor OCG errors (pointed out above) and I'll rate higher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 i cant click them D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I try to see how the image is like the name... How it relates to what it effect is if it was real... Thanks for the comment and rating..... Oh and Click on the Image.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 i cant click them D: Just hit the banners. That should pull them up. I try to see how the image is like the name... How it relates to what it effect is if it was real... Thanks for the comment and rating..... Oh and Click on the Image.. Your welcome. And I try to do that. Sometimes I find it hard :?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Oh Now i see them :] Ohohoho Very Nice Effects. Very Few OCG Errors. I like the Presentation. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks for the comment and rating, and isn't my presentation the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 [spoiler=Here we go...]Rinzo: I won't bother to correct the OCG errors, but this seems very balanced. :) I love the pic. :) Butcher: Slightly overpowered. You can still summon it with mezuki/call of the haunted, and other cards. :? Change "when this card is destroyed," to "When this card is destroyed by battle." Ghost Golem: I love this card, it's great. Love the picture too. All of the pics are great. :) I have nothing to criticize about this card. Parasite: This is great too. Quite balanced, considering you have to use another effect first. It has a lot of speed too, but not to much. Chaos Skeleton: Again, great, wonderful, etc... I love the revival effect. Maybe make it treated as light and dark? It is chaos, after all. Ranger: Some OCG errors, but very balanced and nice. Dragon: Hm... I could see these going into a tribute engine... Maybe Wicked Gods? _____________ I can't see the synchros, fusions, or anything up until the traps. Frozen Rebirth: There's no such thing as a quick play trap... :? I like the grave hands of fate. :) Due to some OCG errors...9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks for the comment rating... I'm loving how you commented by posting like that I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Well, well well Happy to see you again! ^^ Well now with a new name Lol :D well, into the cards: The idea is creepy! D: but amazing x3The images are Great, fits perfect.I can't say that there are OCG errors cuz, the OCG is OK! just writted in another way :3 just that of Graveyard, Field and face-up or face-down. The presentation is Absolutaly Creepy-amazing! so i qait to see more updates here ^^ so for now... 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Well it is suppose to be creepy as you can see the name is "Graveyard Abominations."... Thank you for the comment and rating, more like theese please.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Don't Worry! ;) Creepy is the Best! ;D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I hope u add spell and trap cards soon 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks for the 10/10 Comment.. Didn't get that from some one in a while... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Actor22295 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 no problem im kinda new but so far these cards are some of the most original iv seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 don't use XXXX for atk and def, use ???? instead (Rinzo) for Ghost Golem, summoned should be Summoned for Parasite Arachnid, the 2nd sentence should be "When this card is successfully Special Summoned, the effects of all Trap Cards on the field are negated." 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Alright I'll keep that in mind when I post more cards in there.. Thanks for the OCG correction and Rating.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 love the cards 10/10 great names for all this would be a great add on to my zombie deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thanks for the comment and rating. More comments like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Two words. 10/10. (Or is that one word? xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 10/10? Again I am honored but why?? Not that I don't like it I just want what you enjoy about my set.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fish ~ Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Excellent idea. Pictures fit perfectly. Love the cards overall, really! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Thanks for the comment, if you don't mind whats your rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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