NeoDemonX Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 [spoiler=lore]Increase your Life Points by 100 points for every Water monster that you control on your field. You can Tribute this monster to Special Summon 2 LVL 4 WATER monsters onto your field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 increase should be Increase Water should be WATER the 2 lv4 WATER monsters summoned this way needs to have restrictions, or the effect is OPed 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 thank you I was wondering when you will post here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 It's not like I can be here all the time you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Also I never would thought that the effect would be overpowering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 oh please. 2 lv4 WATER monsters, you're not saying they can't attack, you didn't say they can't use their effects, you didn't even say they can't be used for Tribute or Synchro summoning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 hmmmm ya I wasn't think about that, ok I will remake it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blakeasirda Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Ragnarok is right. It is overpowered if you don't put any restrictions. That would give you big bonuses to just tribute the lv 4 monsters to bring out a big card. Over all a good card other than that though. The picture is slightly smushed but that really can't be helped. I also think maybe it should have less attack points. That is a strong monster that heals life points and special summons monsters. One other thing also, I may be wrong (haven't broken out the cards in a while) but shouldn't it say when the life point increase happens? For example it might say "During your main phase..." or "When this card is summoned..." otherwise it would get confusing. correct me if I am wrong though. I don't want to give out false info.Balance 1.6/3Grammar 2.4/3Originality 2/2Picture 1.5/2Total 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Ragnarok is right. It is overpowered if you don't put any restrictions. That would give you big bonuses to just tribute the lv 4 monsters to bring out a big card. Over all a good card other than that though. The picture is slightly smushed but that really can't be helped. I also think maybe it should have less attack points. That is a strong monster that heals life points and special summons monsters. One other thing also' date=' I may be wrong (haven't broken out the cards in a while) but shouldn't it say when the life point increase happens? For example it might say "During your main phase..." or "When this card is summoned..." otherwise it would get confusing. correct me if I am wrong though. I don't want to give out false info.Balance 1.6/3Grammar 2.4/3Originality 2/2Picture 1.5/2Total 7.5/10[/quote'] Hey! This guy is good ^_^ Well on to the card... onto your field should be to your side of the field. it needs some Drawback and it first effect needs to state how many times you can use this effect or when you can use this effect... work a little more on this 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 OCG correction:"Increase your Life Points by 100 for every WATER monster on your field(Or you control). You can Tribute this monster to Special Summon 2 Level 4 WATER monsters onto your field." Bold bit isnt included but can be used instead of your field. It is OP, it would need just 1 or 2 drawbacks. Card just has positive effects. Picture is ok. 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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