~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 [align=center] Hey everyone I'm new at this. So please tell me if I made any "ocg" errors which I'm sure I did. Please comment and rate thank you... [spoiler=Charmander] [spoiler=Charmeleon] [spoiler=Charizard] [/align] Credits on all Ocg Edits go to "Byak" Thnx bro you really Helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I like the pics except for the charmander Very good OCG 9.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 thanks oscar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 For your first their great. Ocg is good (for your first) pics, are good, but could be better. You forgot to add commas. Which was your biggest problem. Other than that, good for a first set. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Amir u sound so pro thnx for the advice also buddy me cuz ur name isnt acceptable for some reason also check out the lugia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Charmander:"During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Charmeleon" from your hand or Deck." Charmeleon:"During your Standby Phase, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Armed Dragon LV5" from your hand or Deck. (During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Charizard" from your hand or Deck.?)" Charizard:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Charmeleon". You can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Lol. Yeah I dont't really add buddies, cause I never found it helpfull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckCreater722 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 good cards dude, u just need to fix one into 1 on the charmeleon and Charizard cards, other than that good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 great cards. my favourite one is charizard, the pics awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verebazs2 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Good cards, original pics, nice effects.Probably Charmander and Charmeleon would match better to Reptile-type, but that's just my opinion 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Thnx 4 the tipz i'll keep that in mind Verebazs2 when i up date xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tedomime Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Yes very nice cards (good ocg, pics, effects) except for charmeleon that you find a better pic9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 good cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Thnx for the tip Tedomime il think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 You should add spells and traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Nah i dont make those not rlly fun lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Actually in my opinion, those are the easier ones to make. But everyones different I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 9/10.Awesome I like all the pics except charmanders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Lol alot of ppl don't like th charmander...idk why i think its nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckCreater722 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 off topic=Charmander is 1 of my favorite pokemon, i dont see why people dont like it.on topic=Hope to see more cards soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 LOL u can check out My new HOen Legendz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeckCreater722 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 ok will take a look at it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Thnx don't forget to rate and comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 During the End Phase, if this card destroyed a monster by battle (not sure if it's capitalized.)Minor OCG 9-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~ Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Thnx 4 the tip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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