Another batch of cookies for my favorite little tykes!

[Jazin Kay]

[wero-vasto]

I think the first sentence of "Dan" sounds weird... maybe should go like this:

"When this card declares an attack, no card can be activated as response."

 

And the last card seems a little OPed for it's like effect :/

 

other than that i like the cards and the pics ^^

 

8/10

[Jazin Kay]

I didn't want say Mirror Force can't stop him. Only cards that negate attacks can't be activated. Sorta simplifies the ways to defeat him.

 

I tacked on the inability to attack with anything for the last card. Going over scenarios, it would make the user think more about the situation they're in when deciding whether or not to activate it, otherwise it'd just be another "fire away" powerhouse card.

[wero-vasto]

Being that case... i do not know how to write that xD

but the way have it sounds goood :D

[Jazin Kay]

I didn't know how to write it either, actually. I took a risk.

[wero-vasto]

Well, I haven't seen a card with such an effect...

 

So maybe you're making a new OCG ^^

[ragnarok1945]

I feel your synchro monster needs another effect to it to make it OPed like synchros are

 

same for Meticulous Dream, WAY too simple of an effect

 

for Swindy Bird, 2000 atk gain is a little bit too much, maybe drop it to just 1000 atk gain

 

for Furious Dan, half your LP is enough, no need for the "current"

 

8/10

[TOMY_25]

IMO for holy rapture ...

If used for Lightsworns = NIGHTMARE!!

Seriously!!!