Darj Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Its origins are unknown, but from space a powerful Cyber Dragon has arrived to cast Judgment on the Battlefield...Effect: "Cyber Dragon" + "Red-Eyes B. Dragon"A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. When this card is Fusion Summoned, remove all Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of monsters removed x 300 points. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard. Ruling: This card can be Special Summoned by "Red-Eyes Wyvern". I'm stating this so you can consider it if you rate the card. Trivia: The first effect makes reference to the meteors behind the monster; this monster sends junk from fallen Machines to damage the opponent. I really like the effect of this card, but I still feel it lacks something; perhaps it should support Dragons as well?I don't know, so I ask you for suggestions for this card if you think it needs any. Art created by: Jazin Kay EDIT: 1. I zoomed in the image.2. Removed "Cyber" from the card name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Not sure i get the concept. Pic doesn't remind me of Cyber Dragon. Just a fat red-eyes. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Well, the image looks like a robotic dragon but it can't be appreciated in the card because it's zoomed out. I will try to change the image to make the details more clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 I can see the image good and its a good image to. OCG is good not the best but good so here is a OCG fix: A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material monsters. When this card is Fusion Summoned' date=' remove all Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of monsters removed x300 points. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard.[/quote'] Imo Its a good card, my rate is 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 You should change its name so that the Cyber part isn't there....The effect should say DRAGONS & MACHINES and its should be from rfp not from graveyard other than that i like it lots cuz i love me some red eyes in the morning 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yeah, without "Cyber" the name sounds better, but I won't change the effect. I don't wish to make an stronger version of Darkness Metal Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 ahh true....itd be aweome if you mad a fusion between REDMD & Cyber End Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 beast 8/10 for ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 i like the concept.. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Not a bad concept, not the first time I've seen it happen of course the burn effect suits it just fine, as does the rest of the effect 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Thanks for your rates.I think it was the name what bothered me, because now I feel the card is complete. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.WHAM Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 I will agree with you on that point b/c your card rocks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 this remind of CED somewhat but instead of play 1000 to nuke everything and deal 300 per cardits I come out and i eat scrap parts(other machines) and than shoot you with big mouth laser thing and direct 300 per machine XD anyways nice card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 love it 10/10 great name and effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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