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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned you can add 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase in face-up defense position.[/align]

 

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and OCG fix

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This + Lightsworns = Lol.

 

It's card return part is good just in case you dropped JD by accident from milling. It's return effect is balanced since I think the effect is used again when it's Special Summoned like that.

 

I like the name too. It's overall pretty good.

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This + Lightsworns = Lol.

 

It's card return part is good just in case you dropped JD by accident from milling. It's return effect is balanced since I think the effect is used again when it's Special Summoned like that.

 

I like the name too. It's overall pretty good.

 

thanx for your comment

i am glad that u liked it

 

 

I Think its a bit OPed (specially with LS)

 

This card can only be Special Summon= This card can only be Special Summoned

 

Lifepoints= Life Points

 

DEF Position= Defense Position

 

8/10

 

fixed

thanx for your comments

 

cmon peoples i want more comments

 

 

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\ Agreed' date=' i also love the name....

and this card is getting a [b']95%[/b]

 

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good to see you're still in the business, Kira Yamato

 

if you're going to add 3 LIGHT monsters to your hand, I suggest you also skip the drawn phase next turn

 

also it's not BY having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in the Graveyard, it's WHEN you have 6 or more LIGHT monsters in the Graveyard

 

personally I suggest you put a lv restriction on those LIGHT Monsters, or this is going to be hell in a Lightsworn deck

 

8.6/10

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good to see you're still in the business' date=' [b']Kira Yamato[/b]

 

if you're going to add 3 LIGHT monsters to your hand, I suggest you also skip the drawn phase next turn

 

why?

 

also it's not BY having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in the Graveyard, it's WHEN you have 6 or more LIGHT monsters in the Graveyard

 

fixed

 

personally I suggest you put a lv restriction on those LIGHT Monsters, or this is going to be hell in a Lightsworn deck

 

8.6/10

 

 

 

thanx for the advices Ragna :D

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OCG fix~

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand if you have 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, you can return 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon it from your Graveyard during the End Phase in face-up Defense Position.

 

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Works pretty well with LS, maybe too well... Can't say if it is OP or balanced. But, yeah, nice idea. Only things that bother me is the picture. <.<

 

The concept of this card is nice. Please, don't change anything. (Only the picture)

 

Rate - 9.2/10

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OCG fix~

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand if you have 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' you can return 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set during the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon it from your Graveyard during the End Phase in face-up Defense Position.

 

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Works pretty well with LS, maybe too well... Can't say if it is OP or balanced. But, yeah, nice idea. Only things that bother me is the picture. <.<

 

The concept of this card is nice. Please, don't change anything. (Only the picture)

 

[b']Rate[/b] - 9.2/10

 

thanx for the OCG fix

 

i will keep this pic as it is...........anyways thanx for your comments

 

 

cmon peoples i want more comments

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Oh Shephered of the Shadowmoor !

 

Great card man, I can't find any OCG errors,

Seems abit OPd also,

 

Suggestions to balance it out?

either change "by having 6 or more" to "by having exactly 6"

OR

"by having 6 or more LIGHT monsters with different names"

 

also maybe adding a level restriction ?

 

 

good job 8.5/10

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I Think its a bit OPed (specially with LS)

 

This card can only be Special Summon= This card can only be Special Summoned

 

Lifepoints= Life Points

 

DEF Position= Defense Position

 

8/10

 

It's abusable, not OPed.

 

Not a fan of the picture.

But yeah Light Sworns would get a boner with this card.

8/10

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Oh Shephered of the Shadowmoor !

 

Great card man' date=' I can't find any OCG errors,

Seems abit OPd also,

 

Suggestions to balance it out?

either change "by having 6 or more" to "by having exactly 6"

OR

"by having 6 or more LIGHT monsters [b']with different names[/b]"

 

also maybe adding a level restriction ?

 

 

good job 8.5/10

 

hmmm...........ok i'll fix that later

thanks for the advices

 

 

btw what do u mean by level restriction?

 

 

I Think its a bit OPed (specially with LS)

 

This card can only be Special Summon= This card can only be Special Summoned

 

Lifepoints= Life Points

 

DEF Position= Defense Position

 

8/10

 

It's abusable' date=' not OPed.

 

Not a fan of the picture.

But yeah Light Sworns would get a boner with this card.

8/10

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OMFG Edward where?

 

I like the idea of the LIGHT Attribute support. But this card can be abusable if you like raise your Life Points by 1000 every round (I dunno how but it's possible). And use it one more time. It's a pretty good thought out card. I'll give you a good

 

8/10.

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Well, the only part I'm bothered about is:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned you can add 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase in face-up defense position.

 

Maybe change that to remove them from play?

 

Oh, and the pic has text.

 

9/10

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OMFG Edward where?

 

I like the idea of the LIGHT Attribute support. But this card can be abusable if you like raise your Life Points by 1000 every round (I dunno how but it's possible). And use it one more time. It's a pretty good thought out card. I'll give you a good

 

8/10.

 

thanx for your comments

 

 

Well' date=' the only part I'm bothered about is:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by [b']having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard[/b]. When this card is Special Summoned you can add 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase in face-up defense position.

 

Maybe change that to remove them from play?No

 

Oh, and the pic has text. i know

 

9/10

 

thanx for your comments :D

 

 

Level restriction = "Add 3 Level ? or lower LIGHT monsters ..."' date=' where "?" is a number of your chioce, personally I'd make it 4 or 3

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meh

i will keep it as it is

thanx for your comments

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OCG Fix: (This is a fix with Updated OCG)

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned you can add 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 2000 Life points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase in face-up Defense Position."

 

Nice!

 

It's balanced and it's really good although I'd suggest adding "or by it's own effect" in the part where you say how it is special summoned.

 

Love 8/10 ^^

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OCG Fix: (This is a fix with Updated OCG)

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having 6 or more LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned you can add 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you activate this effect. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard' date=' you can pay 2000 Life points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your End Phase in face-up [b']D[/b]efense Position."

 

Nice!

 

It's balanced and it's really good although I'd suggest adding "or by it's own effect" in the part where you say how it is special summoned.

 

Love 8/10 ^^

 

thanx for your comment C.C

and thanx for the fix

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