Guest Zeonark Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Well I could add that if the equipped monster is destroyed, you can Special Summon this monster anyway with the amount of ATK it sapped out. I have no clue how to word that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 use this: If the equipped monster is destroyed by a result of battle or by a card effect while it's ATK was greater than 0, Special Summon this card. This card's original ATK becomes equal to the ATK of the monster it was equipped to when it was destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Added. I got exactly what I didn't want: Incredibly small text on the card. >_> Thanks alot Seph. You're always fixing my OCG errors. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 o_o I <3 this card. From what I can see, there aren't any errors. Not at this point anyway after all the editing xD By the way, I keep a copy of "World Championship 2008" handy for situations like this lol 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blakeasirda Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 You always give good reviews and the such.... but I had never seen one of your cards. till today!You did not disapoint! with a fiend dark deck this card would ROCK. my question is can it equip to another monster to sap some more attack? or can it only do it the one time? For my rating!Balance 3/3 (for having to wait a few turns to get your card)Grammar 3/3Originality 2/2 (I have never seen this before)Art:3/2Total 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 o_o I <3 this card. From what I can see' date=' there aren't any errors. Not at this point anyway after all the editing xD By the way, I keep a copy of "World Championship 2008" handy for situations like this lol 11/10[/quote'] xDThanks alot. When I post a card, there's usually THOUSANDS of edits I have to do. Lol. Thanks for the rating. You always give good reviews and the such.... but I had never seen one of your cards. till today!You did not disapoint! with a fiend dark deck this card would ROCK. my question is can it equip to another monster to sap some more attack? or can it only do it the one time? For my rating!Balance 3/3 (for having to wait a few turns to get your card)Grammar 3/3Originality 2/2 (I have never seen this before)Art:3/2Total 11/10 O:I do? Ohoho. Thanks. Sadly, it can only sap when summoned. Because equipping this over and over would be overpowered. Wowers. Thanks. Never got two 11/10s in a row. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blakeasirda Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 o_o I <3 this card. From what I can see' date=' there aren't any errors. Not at this point anyway after all the editing xD By the way, I keep a copy of "World Championship 2008" handy for situations like this lol 11/10[/quote'] xDThanks alot. When I post a card, there's usually THOUSANDS of edits I have to do. Lol. Thanks for the rating. You always give good reviews and the such.... but I had never seen one of your cards. till today!You did not disapoint! with a fiend dark deck this card would ROCK. my question is can it equip to another monster to sap some more attack? or can it only do it the one time? For my rating!Balance 3/3 (for having to wait a few turns to get your card)Grammar 3/3Originality 2/2 (I have never seen this before)Art:3/2Total 11/10 O:I do? Ohoho. Thanks. Sadly' date=' it can only sap when summoned. Because equipping this over and over would be overpowered. Wowers. Thanks. Never got two 11/10s in a row.[/quote'] I kinda thought that but you know I had to make sure. My rating stands then. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Why does that image remind me of a Cyberdark?Huh. This gets the rating of you average hand sanitizer.99.99% Why missing the .01?Because- Wait... "LOL-EQUIP"! 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 great effect. interesting and powerfull. i love the pic. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raphidra Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Pic is good, but isn't the best ever. Pretty good effect, I think it could be a bit less confuse, but good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 You always give good reviews and the such.... but I had never seen one of your cards. till today!You did not disapoint! with a fiend dark deck this card would ROCK. my question is can it equip to another monster to sap some more attack? or can it only do it the one time? For my rating!Balance 3/3 (for having to wait a few turns to get your card)Grammar 3/3Originality 2/2 (I have never seen this before)Art:3/2Total 11/10 O:I do? Ohoho. Thanks. Sadly' date=' it can only sap when summoned. Because equipping this over and over would be overpowered.[/quote'] "If the equipped monster is destroyed while it's ATK was greater than 0, Special Summon this card. " Excuse me, but it will keep sapping until they have no monsters - still not OP'd though. However, were you to change this to only work on Normal Summon, it'd sap once and make better use of the ATK gain - your choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Why does that image remind me of a Cyberdark?Huh. This gets the rating of you average hand sanitizer.99.99% Why missing the .01?Because- Wait... "LOL-EQUIP"! 10/10. ...Nope. That's probably not what I was thinking. But it is like Cyber Dark. Lol. LOL-EQUIP!;D Thanks. great effect. interesting and powerfull. i love the pic. 9.5/10 Thanks. Pic is good' date=' but isn't the best ever. Pretty good effect, I think it could be a bit less confuse, but good job.[/quote'] I'm bad at finding good pics. >_>Thanks. "If the equipped monster is destroyed while it's ATK was greater than 0' date=' Special Summon this card. " Excuse me, but it will keep sapping until they have no monsters - still not OP'd though. However, were you to change this to only work on Normal Summon, it'd sap once and make better use of the ATK gain - your choice.[/quote'] ...Oh hey.I did forget that.Thanks for pointing that out. Fixing now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 =O Love. Pure sexy love! 10/10 I cant find anything wrong with it and it has the most epic effect I've ever seen! It's totally balanced to me and completely playable. I want ._. Oh so badly do I want this . _ . Congrats your only the....7th person to recieve a pure 10/10 from me in all my YCM time :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 HOLY POOP...i luvs dis card...i think it's smex9/10 (nothing's perfect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 =O Love. Pure sexy love! 10/10 I cant find anything wrong with it and it has the most epic effect I've ever seen! It's totally balanced to me and completely playable. I want ._. Oh so badly do I want this . _ . Congrats your only the....7th person to recieve a pure 10/10 from me in all my YCM time :3 ...Holyshi-A 10/10 from Lovely? Now I honestly feel godly. Thanks. It really means alot to get a score like that from an epic card maker. HOLY POOP...i luvs dis card...i think it's smex9/10 (nothing's perfect) Lol. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 after the recent changes, i'll have to increase the rate a little.... ill up to 9.6/10 you dont get the perfect 10 because it the card itself wouldnt be that overused in the actual card game because it's still a tad slowish....maybe only in stall decks or the like.....i'd run 1 just for the lol's however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Don't want it sapping fast like 1500 ATK. Lol. I do agree that this is slowish though. Yet, I'm still proud of it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Weasel_46 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 First, I'd just like to say thatThis effect : Me :: Pillz : Louis I'll take a crack at a rewording!"When you Normal Summon this card, equip it to 1 monster your opponent controls as an Equip Spell Card and take control of the equipped monster. The equipped monster cannot declare an attack. During each Standby Phase, decrease the equipped monster's original ATK by 1000. If the equipped monster's ATK becomes 0, it is destroyed. When the equipped monster is destroyed, Special Summon this card to your side of the field. This card's original ATK becomes equal to the original ATK of the destroyed monster." or 500 points or whatever it's at now...How about that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I think that's the early wording. Since part of it is left out(The part about if the equipped monster gets destroyed.). I don't think you need to state that it becomes an equip spell. ...Not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Weasel_46 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 The Union monsters do, but IDK if you would need to specify that for this cuz it's not Union.Maybe not :PAlso I didn't give you a rating yet9.99 (repeating of course) / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Probably not. Gah. Confusing OCG is confusing. Thanks very much for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 ocg should be fine now, it doesnt require any further correction i believe. this card reminds me alot of paracite paraside (looks wise) not effect...never able to pull that card off to be honest........spose it wasnt that good to begin with.....you should make a set of paracites on that note. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 A Set/Archetype of Parasites? I would have no clue how to start it up or the main idea of it. Maybe each one somehow drains ATK? Hmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Bump. C'mon guys. I want some moar comments before I let this die. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 So, you can take control of any monster your opponent without a cost... lolNormal Summon this card, take control of 1 monster your opponent control, Tribute this and the monster you took control to Normal Summon a high leveled monster. Or you can keep the stole monster on the field and activating its effect over and over, until his ATK reaches 0 and your lol-equip card comes to the field with a good ATK and DEF. Eeeeh... I don't know... over powered ? :'/ Rate~ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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