shadowka Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 image credit to wanderly let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Needs some OCG fixing, which i'm too lazy to do atm.Nice pictures, bad effects.The first card is op'd.Good for a new card maker.3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowka Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Needs some OCG fixing' date=' which i'm too lazy to do atm.Nice pictures, bad effects.The first card is op'd.Good for a new card maker.3/5[/quote'] first card may be oped, but you still have to pay 1000 life points to activate it's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Needs some OCG fixing' date=' which i'm too lazy to do atm.Nice pictures, bad effects.The first card is op'd.Good for a new card maker.3/5[/quote'] all of this here 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowka Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 i think 3/10 is a little harsh. i didnt think it was THAT bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperNarb Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 4/10, Not to kill your ego, or any pride for your card, but this is bad even for a beginner. Nice try though? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 i think 3/10 is a little harsh. i didnt think it was THAT bad OKAY I admit it it was pretty good 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowka Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 what can I do to make a better card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Needs some OCG fixing' date=' which i'm too lazy to do atm.Nice pictures, bad effects.The first card is op'd.Good for a new card maker.3/5[/quote'] first card may be oped, but you still have to pay 1000 life points to activate it's effect. So?You still get a free 2800 Direct Attack. >_> 4/10' date=' Not to kill your ego, or any pride for your card, but this is bad even for a beginner. Nice try though?[/quote'] *Facepalm*They aren't bad. They just need work. one should be 1out of play should be from playexept should be except The first card needs harder summoning conditions. Even JD isn't that easy to get out with just 1 monster. /: Second card is perfectly fine. But it's revival effect is a bit much. Maybe add a drawback like it's ATK is decreased or it can't attack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Weasel_46 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Needs some OCG fixing' date=' which i'm too lazy to do atm.Nice pictures, bad effects.The first card is op'd.Good for a new card maker.3/5[/quote'] 1st card: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Servant of The Dark One" in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, by paying 1000 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly." 2nd card: "When a Fiend-Type monster you control is destroyed, you may Special Summon this card from your Graveyard." There ya go, Scyire. Hope I didn't miss anything. ;PI think they're pretty good though. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 The concept is somewhat interesting, but the effects aren't. They need to be more elaborate, and the first one needs a backdraft to its effect. 1000 LP isn't much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 these are pretty good minor problems like ocgand wanderly knows his pics alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 it should have an effect while it's on the field, not just a quick way to get it onto the field and that's it and there's capitalization errors in the text 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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