[ᴊᴉᴍᴍᴪᴛᴙᴑᴎ] Exclusive, Never-Before-Seen PARASITE Card...but wait...ITZA FIEND?!?

[JIMMYTRON]

ALSO...POSSIBLY MY LONGEST EFFECT EVAR!!

ALSO...POSSIBLY MY LONGEST EFFECT[/size] EVAR!!

 

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Lore: During your opponent's Standby Phases, if he/she controls more than 2 monsters, you can equip this card to 1 face-up monster that he/she controls. While equipped to a monster, decrease the ATK by x250 for each card in your opponent's hand. If the equipped monster's ATK is reduced to 0, it is removed from play. If the equipped monster is removed from play by this effect, this card is Special Summoned in face-up Defensive Position on your side of the field. If it was not, then this card returns to your hand during the next End Phase of your opponent's turn, but the reduction of ATK to the equipped monster is still applied. This effect can only be used once per Duel.[/align]

 

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RATE IT OR HATE IT...YOUR CHOICE

[ragnarok1945]

change Defensive Position to Defense Position

 

"but the reduction of ATK to the equipped monster is still applied." <---this part sounds weird for the OCG

 

plus I'm not sure if once per duel is a little too rare or not

 

8/10

[JIMMYTRON]

i mean if i make this card so where you can do it contiuously, i would think that it's OP'ed...so i put once per duel

[The-Wick!]

nice card, it would work well in an infestation deck, some spells would work well to. Minor OCG error but is ok, no body is perfect =P i mean, OCG its not the bigger problem, i think that i shouldn't count it to much, if i understand i can tell you how to correct it and its good anyway =P

 

9/10

[JIMMYTRON]

@ The-Wick

hey thanx mate...appreciate it

[The-Wick!]

;D that is what we are made for, create cards, help and be helped ^^.

[JIMMYTRON]

BUMPNESS

[JIMMYTRON]

bump

[JIMMYTRON]

3x BUmp