my very first card

[killroyjr]

well was kinda think about this all day with a bunch friends while dueling let me know what ya think

 

 

send one card from your hand and one from your opponent's hand to the graveyard. during this card's second standby phase you can special summon the monsters sent to the graveyard to the field. when the monsters are destroyed you take 800 life points for each monster summoned this way.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

hmm, it doesnt really make sense...

 

also, Trap Cards can't actually be equip cards. so i would remove it and make it a normal trap.

 

use this:

 

Each player sends 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard. Then, each player can select a monster in their opponent's Graveyard and Special Summon it.

 

that would work. unless you wanted to make it a Continuous Trap?

 

use this effect then:

 

Each player sends 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard. During the 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation, you can Special Summon any monsters sent from the field to the Graveyard. Each time a monster Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed, you take 800 damage.

 

overall, not bad for your first card.. picture is kinda blurry and you should capitalise the name so it looks nicer..

 

 

7.5/10 as the actual card is kind of overpowered.......

[ragnarok1945]

the picture is blurry, and there's capitalization errors to go with it as well

 

should have put summoning level restrictions on the monsters too

 

7.3/10

[killroyjr]

working on trying to claify the pic up a bit i will revise when i get some more free time