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MY NEWEST CARD YET (DRAGON)


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-Again, do not capitalize the name and Type

-Normal Monsters do not have Effects. Make it an Effect Monster instead.

-The image has a white border around it. Try to crop it or find a better image of it.

-Effect is overpowered. If you already have 2 strong Dragon-Type monsters on the field, then you'll also be getting a 3rd one. Because of its ridiculously high points, a more balanced effect would be something like:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 5 Dragon-Type monsters you control. This card cannot declare an attack during the same turn that it is Summoned."

-Again too, the ATK/DEF points are too powerful for a Normal Monster. The maximum amount of points for them should be 3000, unless the effect has a major drawback.

 

Try to take note of what I said to make this card much better. 3/10.

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good for a new member 99999/10

 

how is this card good in anyway? it has bad OCG totally Capitelized name AND has an all caps type + its OP'ed and its not an effect monster. so in total you have earned a score of... wait for it.... ABSOLUTELY NOTHING! BUT since the picture is OK so you've earned a score of ALMOST ABSOLUTELY NOTHING

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be glad atleast you tried and also inspired me to make a dragon card ^^

 

well i guess even though the card is bad and everything else as you said he tried but at least put some more effort in to your cards. learn to capitlelize your cards, stop making the name and type in all caps, if you need any more help you can PM me if you want ;)

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-Again' date=' do not capitalize the name and Type

-Normal Monsters do not have Effects. Make it an Effect Monster instead.

-The image has a white border around it. Try to crop it or find a better image of it.

-Effect is overpowered. If you already have 2 strong Dragon-Type monsters on the field, then you'll also be getting a 3rd one. Because of its ridiculously high points, a more balanced effect would be something like:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 5 Dragon-Type monsters you control. This card cannot declare an attack during the same turn that it is Summoned."

-Again too, the ATK/DEF points are too powerful for a Normal Monster. The maximum amount of points for them should be 3000, unless the effect has a major drawback.

 

Try to take note of what I said to make this card much better. 3/10.

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good ol starly always thinking like i am

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