My first cards (Leech)

[inventore]

This are my first cards.

 

When this card is summoned by Special Summon, increases the ATK by 400 Points.

 

 

A monster equipped with this card gains 500 ATK and 400 DEF.

 

 

Abosrbs 200 ATK and DEF from each monster on the field.

 

When this card is summoned, you can summon a Dark Tree (or more) in Defense Position.

If this card is attacked by a monster, destroys a Dark Tree to cancel the attack.

 

 

An ancient tree has become evil, and it's very perverse.

 

 

When this card destroys an enemy's monster, the controller of this card gains half of the enemy's monster ATK.

 

 

This card increases by 500 ATK all the monsters that have in the name the word Leech (also -leech).

Also destroys all the Light cards.

 

 

When this card is summoned, remove from the game an enemy monster.

 

 

What do you think?

[GOLDNUKE]

THESE ARE NICE CARDS

[inventore]

THESE ARE NICE CARDS

 

Thanks! :D

[Øverek357Ø]

these unfortunatlly are not the best cards actually the OCG is off i am not saying that you need to be perfect like most everyone else says (i'm not) but you should ask for some help.

[Guest ash_202457]

i agree with Øverek357Ø.

I'm not perfect ethier

[Big-P]

PICS 8/10

 

OCG 10/10

 

OVERALL 9/10

 

GOOD if u keep on makin cards like these u will go far

[Where are my COOKIES]

Fake types. Last one is OPed.

 

8-10

[Home Slice]

PICS 8/10

 

OCG 10/10

 

OVERALL 9/10

 

GOOD if u keep on makin cards like these u will go far

No just no

[inventore]

Thank you very much!!! :-D

[inventore]

Bump! Rate please.

[bigedf]

Not bad for firsts.

Summon should be capitalized

OK pics

Some OCG errors

 

7/10

 

Keep up the good work!

[inventore]

Not bad for firsts.

Summon should be capitalized

OK pics

Some OCG errors

 

7/10

 

Keep up the good work!

 

What OCG errors?

[Expelsword]

I like the picture of Soren as the Aprentice Wizard :lol:

 

 

just a heads up: When GOLDNUKE says anything, it's irrelevant

 

your cards are ok, but what subtracts from them is the grammar

make sure they sound like an actual card would (especially around here)

[bigedf]

Not bad for firsts.

Summon should be capitalized

OK pics

Some OCG errors

 

7/10

 

Keep up the good work!

 

What OCG errors?

 

When this card is summoned by Special Summon' date=' increase[b']s[/b] the ATK by 400 Points.

 

Abosrbs 200 ATK and DEF from each monster on the field.

should be

This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each monster on the field.

OR

Decrease each monster on the field's ATK and DEF by 200 points. This card gains the accumulated points.

 

When this card is summoned, you can summon a Dark Tree (or more) in Defense Position.

If this card is attacked by a monster, destroys a Dark Tree to cancel the attack.

should be

When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon as many "Dark Tree" cards in Defense Position as possible. When this card is attacked, tribute 1 "Dark Tree" to negate the attack.

 

When this card destroys an opponent's monster, the controller of this card gains half of the opponent's monster ATK.

 

This card increases by 500 ATK all the monsters that have in the name the word Leech (also -leech).

Also destroys all the Light cards.

Should be

Every card on the field with "Leech" in it's card name gains 500 ATK points. All LIGHT Attribute monsters on the field are destroyed.

 

When this card is summoned, remove from the game an enemy monster.

Should be

When this card is Summoned, remove 1 of your opponent's monsters from play.

 

Here you go.:D

[Aero~]

summoned should be Summoned.

make Wizard type Spellcaster Type.

Tree Type should be Plant Type.

OCG errors.

7/10

[B3lly N3rd]

Amazing i understand what the cards are syaing so idc about ocg really and i really like the equip card your the first and only new member to inspire me

[Kylesg123]

i like the cards! they are nice and really good! better than me!

8/10