Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Please Comment and rate my new Psychic cardsCorrect My [¤OCG¤] PleaseCorrect My [¤OCG¤][spoiler=[color=#DAA520]Big Head Psychic Spider[/color]][/center]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4144/483930.jpg' alt='483930.jpg'>[/center][/center]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4144/483930.jpg' alt='483930.jpg'>[/center][/center]Lore :You can activate this card when a psychic-type monster is a target of an attack , choose 1 of the following effect :-Negate the attack and descrease your opponent LP by 1000-Negate the attack and increase your LP by 1500-Negate the ATK and destroy the attack monster [¤Pic by nightmarian¤] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 end phase = End Phase Good cards for a new member because you ae new 9.4 / 10 MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Thank you MK New card addedComment and rate please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 You know that Vedalken is the real name of a card in Magic The Gathering, right? I don't think you should copy the names. I guess it's ok to use their pics, because I did it, too, but the names you should create yourself. For the cards, I think they are good. I've always liked Psychic monster, they are my favorite. I think, though, that *PSYCHIC* should be just Psychic-Type? Not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I start to like psychic card..they play with LP..but that 1st card is too low for amount of LP,and i think that 1st is UP'd.. I think..well.. Good Cards!!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 thx all =) theory = i dont now for the name sry ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 No problem. Some people might have difficult in creating a name. That was just my opinion, because I personally think that anyone can think a little and create a good name ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 New card !Comment and rate please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I think that your OCG needs some work. I don't know if I can, but if you want I may try fixing it. New pic = Epic. I loved it.Anyway, the concept seems ok, as I said, only the OCG needs a few work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 New card , thanks Theory and yes you can try to fix the OCG =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 right I am going to be honest here you are rushing to try and make too many cards. the 5th one is very oped and the effects on some of the cards are similar MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Once per turn you can increase the ATK of 1 Psychic-Type monster by 100 for each monster on the field until your opponent's End Phase . If this card is attacked , descrease the ATK of this card by 50 for each monster on the field until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed in battle , draw 1 card or increase your LP by 150 for each monster on the field . This card [bgains effects, based on the number of Psychic-Type monsters you control.2+ : Increase the ATK of all your Psychic-type monster by 500.3+ :Once per turn, you can redirect an attack which would target aPsychic-b]Type[/b] monster you control to an other Psychic-Type monster on the field.4+ : Your Psychic-Type monsters are unaffected by the effect of Trap cards.5+ : Your Psychic-Type monsters level 3 or lower cannot be destroyed in battle.You can only control 1 "Psychic Incubate Room" This card cannot by destroyed in battle . Once per turn, pay 800 LP or destroy this card. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. You can tribute this card to negate the activation of an Spell or Trap card. Pay 500 LP to choose 1 of the following effect :- Set 2 "Psychic Interrogator" in Defense position on your side of the field-Send to 3 at the top of your deck to the graveyard to increase your LP by 800 for each card send to the graveyard-discard 1 monster from your hand to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Psychic" lvl 5 or lower from your deck in Defense position on your side of the field. Tribute 3 Psychic-Type monster lvl 5 or more you control to increase your LP by 1800 for each tributed monster. You can activate this card when a Psychic-Type monster is a target of an attack , choose 1 of the following effect :-Negate the attack and descrease your opponent LP by 1000-Negate the attack and increase your LP by 1500-Negate the ATK and destroy the attack monster Well, I think it's all. There might be still a lot of errors, because I corrected just what I think is wrong. And... In my opinion, Psychic Absortion is very OP'd (Overpowered, if you don't know). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Now its better for Psychic absorption ??Thank you for the correction Theory Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 better, good change on the 5th card MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I think it is, since Level 5 monsters require 1 tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c009tas Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Once per turn you can increase the ATK of 1 Psychic-Type monster by 100 for each monster on the field until your opponent's End Phase . If this card is attacked ' date=' descrease the ATK of this card by 50 for each monster on the field until the [b']End Phase. If this card is destroyed in battle , draw 1 card or increase your LP by 150 for each monster on the field . This card [bgains[/b] effects, based on the number of Psychic-Type monsters you control.2+ : Increase the ATK of all your Psychic-type monster by 500.3+ :Once per turn, you can redirect an attack which would target aPsychic-b]Type[/b] monster you control to an other Psychic-Type monster on the field.4+ : Your Psychic-Type monsters are unaffected by the effect of Trap cards.5+ : Your Psychic-Type monsters level 3 or lower cannot be destroyed in battle.You can only control 1 "Psychic Incubate Room" This card cannot by destroyed in battle . Once per turn, pay 800 LP or destroy this card. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. You can tribute this card to negate the activation of an Spell or Trap card. Pay 500 LP to choose 1 of the following effect :- Set 2 "Psychic Interrogator" in Defense position on your side of the field-Send to 3 at the top of your deck to the graveyard to increase your LP by 800 for each card send to the graveyard-discard 1 monster from your hand to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Psychic" lvl 5 or lower from your deck in Defense position on your side of the field. Tribute 3 Psychic-Type monster lvl 5 or more you control to increase your LP by 1800 for each tributed monster. You can activate this card when a Psychic-Type monster is a target of an attack , choose 1 of the following effect :-Negate the attack and descrease your opponent LP by 1000-Negate the attack and increase your LP by 1500-Negate the ATK and destroy the attack monster Well, I think it's all. There might be still a lot of errors, because I corrected just what I think is wrong. And... In my opinion, Psychic Absortion is very OP'd (Overpowered, if you don't know). You missed every use of "LP" instead of saying "Life Points" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I think it may be Life Points and LP. It is right in both ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Thx all , hum ... can you give me an idea for the next card ? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Umm, ur pics are stolen from another TCG. I dont think many ppl know this, but A LOT of ppl are getting their images from another card game called: "Magic: The Gathering" and I know cuz i play and their pics are better than any other card game and are at the least equal to ANY other pic used for a card on this site, if not greater than. Any ways, ur pics by nightmarian are all stolen from that game, and lots of ppl do that w/o knowing, so it's not ur fault necesarrily, but seeing as "Vedalken Entrancer" is the EXACT name of a card from Magic, I think u used those pics knowing anyways. So to all of u out there who love some of these pics sooo much that u just HVE to use them, plz give credit to the ppl who RLLY made them... "Wizards of the Coast" Otherwise, the cards rlly don't appeal to me in their effects. And being a Magic player, using those pics just bugs the hell outta me. 3/10Change ur big head, vedalken, and psychic infusion (or transfusion, i forget) pics, and i'll raise the grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Ok so , huuum ... i have found my pics here : http://www.4shared.com/dir/14344182/63f0f636/sharing.html and i'm french so i dont understand all of your post sorry ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theory Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Umm' date=' ur pics are stolen from another TCG. I dont think many ppl know this, but A LOT of ppl are getting their images from another card game called: "Magic: The Gathering" and I know cuz i play and their pics are better than any other card game and are at the least equal to ANY other pic used for a card on this site, if not greater than. Any ways, ur pics by nightmarian are all stolen from that game, and lots of ppl do that w/o knowing, so it's not ur fault necesarrily, but seeing as "Vedalken Entrancer" is the EXACT name of a card from Magic, I think u used those pics knowing anyways. So to all of u out there who love some of these pics sooo much that u just HVE to use them, plz give credit to the ppl who RLLY made them... "Wizards of the Coast" Otherwise, the cards rlly don't appeal to me in their effects. And being a Magic player, using those pics just bugs the hell outta me. 3/10Change ur big head, vedalken, and psychic infusion (or transfusion, i forget) pics, and i'll raise the grade.[/quote']It isn't against the rules using pictures from MTG. It's ridiculous you drop the rate so much just because he used the pics. I agree that the name he should have thought by himself, but the pics ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 basically, some of your pictures are stolen from another card game, which I happen to play. A lot of people do this, which annoys me. And though It may not be your fault because a lot of people do not know about this other card game, one of your cards has the exact same as a card from the game that i play, so I thought that you purposefully and knowingly took those pictures, from the other card game.Umm' date=' ur pics are stolen from another TCG. I dont think many ppl know this, but A LOT of ppl are getting their images from another card game called: "Magic: The Gathering" and I know cuz i play and their pics are better than any other card game and are at the least equal to ANY other pic used for a card on this site, if not greater than. Any ways, ur pics by nightmarian are all stolen from that game, and lots of ppl do that w/o knowing, so it's not ur fault necesarrily, but seeing as "Vedalken Entrancer" is the EXACT name of a card from Magic, I think u used those pics knowing anyways. So to all of u out there who love some of these pics sooo much that u just HVE to use them, plz give credit to the ppl who RLLY made them... "Wizards of the Coast" Otherwise, the cards rlly don't appeal to me in their effects. And being a Magic player, using those pics just bugs the hell outta me. 3/10Change ur big head, vedalken, and psychic infusion (or transfusion, i forget) pics, and i'll raise the grade.[/quote']It isn't against the rules using pictures from MTG. It's ridiculous you drop the rate so much just because he used the pics. I agree that the name he should have thought by himself, but the pics ... Actually, most of the lost points are from card abilities. Sure the pics annoy me, but the effects were not to my liking either. I considered a lower grade becuz of the pics, but I did not want to base my grade off of the pics alone. If i had, it would be lower than it is now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 I have changed the name of the third card , now its better ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emperor 217 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 ok cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tagada Massacre Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 up ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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