[cmc1234] Rapid Fire Dragon

[cmc1234]

This is a card im using in a contest so i thought i would post it here to. Image credit goes to jazin Kay's awesome image archive. Idk about ocg, iv been rusty lately. Hope you like

 

EFFECT:

 

[spoiler=Long Version]EFFECT:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn by removing from play 1 Trap Card from your side of the field you can destroy 1 face-up Monster Card on your opponents side of the field and add it to your Graveyard. Increase this card ATK by 200 for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Decrease this cards DEF by 200 for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. When this cards DEF is decreased to 0 by this effect this card is destroyed, When this card is destroyed you can add 1 "Rapid Fire Dragon" from your Deck to your hand.

 

[spoiler=Short Version]

EFFECT:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Trap Card you control to destroy 1 face-up Monster your opponent controls and send it to your Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK and loses 200 DEF for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. If this card's DEF becomes 0 by its own effect, destroy it. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 "Rapid Fire Dragon" from your Deck to your hand.

 

[jayjack]

Nice. but whats the point of this: "and add it to your Graveyard"

Sorta creates confusion and its a pointless effect.

Great picture! Though looks more like a machine then dragon O.o

8/10

[Jolta]

So... DEF is decreased for ATK? Probably the concept of "Fire grows more dangerous after a long time" (concept of Burn Deck)

 

9/10

[cmc1234]

Nice. but whats the point of this: "and add it to your Graveyard"

Sorta creates confusion and its a pointless effect.

Great picture! Though looks more like a machine then dragon O.o

8/10

 

Becasue this cards ATK is increased when FIRE monsters are in your Graveyard. So You want as much FIRE monsters as you can. And if your oppoent has FIRE monsters to' date=' your going to want those. Thats why i have that effect is there

 

Thx

 

So... DEF is decreased for ATK? Probably the concept of "Fire grows more dangerous after a long time" (concept of Burn Deck)

 

9/10

 

Thx jolta!

[jayjack]

Nice. but whats the point of this: "and add it to your Graveyard"

Sorta creates confusion and its a pointless effect.

Great picture! Though looks more like a machine then dragon O.o

8/10

 

Becasue this cards ATK is increased when FIRE monsters are in your Graveyard. So You want as much FIRE monsters as you can. And if your oppoent has FIRE monsters to' date=' your going to want those. Thats why i have that effect is there

 

Thx

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So its only useful if your opponent runs fire monsters. Dunno if its such a good idea. It would create confusion in the game. I suggest you remove it or edit it.

[cmc1234]

Nice. but whats the point of this: "and add it to your Graveyard"

Sorta creates confusion and its a pointless effect.

Great picture! Though looks more like a machine then dragon O.o

8/10

 

Becasue this cards ATK is increased when FIRE monsters are in your Graveyard. So You want as much FIRE monsters as you can. And if your oppoent has FIRE monsters to' date=' your going to want those. Thats why i have that effect is there

 

Thx

[/quote']

So its only useful if your opponent runs fire monsters. Dunno if its such a good idea. It would create confusion in the game. I suggest you remove it or edit it.

 

Ya pretty much, And thats not the only reason. Lets say your oppoent has a real good monster/spell/trap card on their graveyard and you want it. This effect will let you. Though i do see your point and i do kind of get it so maybe i will edit it.

[G-Break]

nice cards..

the effect seems bit confusing..

well i like the pics.. 8/10

[cmc1234]

Thx!

[Darj]

Your OCG is fine, but it could be shorter:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Trap Card you control to destroy 1 face-up Monster your opponent controls and send it to your Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK and loses 200 DEF for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. If this card's DEF becomes 0 by its own effect, destroy it. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 "Rapid Fire Dragon" from your Deck to your hand.

[cmc1234]

That does make it eaiser XD

 

Thx

[-Griffin]

Hey look, odd FIRE Support. Kinda nice.

 

Must the Trap be face-up? That's how I interpret this ATM.

[Dante Dimercurio]

Picture: 10/10.. I have got to say --> wow.

 

OCG: 10/10. My friend this is very good.

 

 

Total: 11/10. Awesome broseph.

[cmc1234]

Thx Chaos Star!

[-Griffin]

Must the Trap be face-up? That's how I interpret this ATM.

[cmc1234]

OO sorry. No it does not have to

[cmc1234]

Bump

[cmc1234]

bump

[Rusty Shovel]

iv been rusty lately.

 

YES!!!

 

xD.

 

 

Pic is fine, OCG is pretty good. Effect is ok.

 

8/10

 

-RS

[Choke]

OCG Fix

OCG Fix

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Trap Card from your side of the field from play to destroy 1 face-up Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field and add it to your Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Decrease this card's DEF by 200 for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. When this card's DEF is decreased to 0 by this effect this card is destroyed, When this card is destroyed you can add 1 "Rapid Fire Dragon" from your Deck to your hand.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Trap Card from your side of the field from play to destroy 1 face-up Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field and add it to your Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. Decrease this card's DEF by 200 for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. When this card's DEF is decreased to 0 by this effect this card is destroyed, When this card is destroyed you can add 1 "Rapid Fire Dragon" from your Deck to your hand.

 

The bolded is the corrections. Some of them are probably right, but I switched it too another correct OCG and it sounds more crisp. Like you can "by removing from play 3 FIRE monster", but I think "by removing 3 FIRE monsters from play" sounds better. Thats just my opinion though.

 

Anyways, the pic is amazing, perfect style for yugioh. 9/10

[Illyria]

Looks cool. Very nice card, interesting effect. 8.9/10 Keep it up ^^

[cmc1234]

Thanks Guys all 3 of you XD